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Hot Spring Shower

October 4, 2023
By clown PLATINUM, Hartland, Wisconsin
clown PLATINUM, Hartland, Wisconsin
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After being pitfully cold, you’d seer out a hot spring shower. 

It resurrects your blood flow back to life.

The heat smothers your cold body.

It makes your skin feel like it's peeling off.

It feels like it's melting you.

Until you look down and discover your skin fell off,

And you're gushing dark red.


The author's comments:

This is written in a genre called 55 Fiction and is a novel told in exactly 55 words.


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