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What Society Tells Me

May 14, 2015
By LisaMarie Johnson BRONZE, Stratford, Connecticut
LisaMarie Johnson BRONZE, Stratford, Connecticut
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                                 What Society Tells Me
                                 After Jamaica Kincaid

Do not be late for the 1st day of school; work hard from the beginning till the end; finish those college applications on time or even better, ahead of time; do not wait until the last minute and be one of those procrastinators who claims they produce their best work under pressure; your personal essay is very important; be elegant, likable, nostalgic, interesting, and caring all through your words; be who you are in your essay as long as who you are is good enough and what they want to hear; what if they don’t want to hear what I have to say?;mid-October will be a drag but do not get weary and lazy with your school work; keep pushing; enjoy winter break; everyone celebrates Christmas, tis’ the season; What if I’m not a Christian?; New Years is a celebration and we all watch the glass ball drop in Times Square; oh and don’t forget to make New Years Resolutions, but if you don’t follow through with them don’t worry, no one does; by now it’s senior spring and you think all your issues are gone; wrong, your life is really about to begin; make the right choices; you have to get good grades this semester so you can say you graduated with honors; do not fail because if you fail now you won’t get into a good college; if you don’t get into a good college you won’t be anything in life; why is college the only way to be successful?; Make sure you get into a good school, where you have great opportunities; don’t party too hard; don’t do drugs or alcohol because you can die and be the failure, I’m afraid your going to be; focus, focus, focus; balance, balance, balance; process, process, process; repeat; do what I tell you and you will succeed; you need to find a job and make some money because one day no one will support you; just make ends met; don’t be that optimist that thinks they are going to be a millionaire because you won’t; ordinary people can only make bare minimum; ordinary people are survivors; why can’t we not only survive but live?; have you not listened to anything I have told you!?; people who live life fail because they don’t focus on what’s really important; trust me, you do not want to get diverged from your goals because then you will never achieve them; once you finish college, begin to look for a husband; men don’t like sluts who are willing to be with anything and everyone; be classy, poised, a lady; eat properly, not barbarically; do as you’re told and he will call you a keeper; don’t worry about being in love because it never works out as planned; haven’t you seen the movies?; love causes trouble and heartaches; don’t love; just avoid it; your kids are your life now; do all that you can for them and when you get old they will take care of you; grow old and realize that your whole life you never did anything for yourself; please everyone else and do what society tells you; never break out of the rhythm of your life; be like a robot doing the same thing over and over; never explore or take adventures; only know the world within the four walls of your home; never live life, only survive.


The author's comments:

This piece was an imitation of the style of a piece entitled "Girl" by Jamaica Kincaid. I hope that through reading this piece people realize how society's voice should not be the loudest in their ears because they will then grow old to realize they never listened to the drum of their own life. 


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