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February 17, 2024
By Natitoon GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
Natitoon GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
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Player - story based on the character of Phoebus de Chateaupers from the Hunchback of notre dame 


Natitoon

It was the year 1482 in the enchanting city of Paris, France. The streets were bustling with life, and the air was filled with the aroma of freshly baked bread and the sound of laughter. It was in this vibrant atmosphere that my story began.


 I, Captain Phœbus de Châteaupers was a dashing young soldier, known throughout the city as a notorious womanizer. My charm and good looks were said to be irresistible, and I had a reputation for effortlessly winning the hearts of any woman I desired. But little did they know,  my heart was as fickle as the wind.


One sunny afternoon, as I strolled through the streets, I stumbled upon a crowd gathered around a captivating sight. There, in the center, was a 16 year old gypsy girl named Esmeralda, dancing with grace and passion. Her movements were like poetry in motion, and her beauty was unmatched. As she twirled and swayed, her husband, a 26-year-old blonde haired -blue eyed man named, Pierre Gringoire, played a tambourine, collecting money from the mesmerized onlookers.

I couldn't tear my eyes away from Esmeralda. Her dark, lustrous hair cascaded down her back, and her emerald green eyes sparkled with a fire that seemed to ignite the very air around her. I was captivated, and I knew I had to meet her.


After her performance, I approached Esmeralda, offering her a bouquet of flowers and showering her with compliments. She blushed and smiled, believing that my gestures were a sign of true affection. Little did she know, I had ulterior motives.


Pierre, being aware of my infamous amorous exploits, tried to warn Esmeralda about my true nature. He told her stories of broken hearts and shattered dreams, but she dismissed his words, convinced that my love for her was genuine.


Days turned into weeks, and Esmeralda and I spent more time together. She was infatuated with me, and I reveled in the attention. But deep down, I knew that my heart belonged to another – Fleur de Lys, my fiancée. I used Esmeralda as a pawn to make Fleur jealous, to make her realize that I was a man desired by many.


One fateful day, as the sun set over the city, I broke Esmeralda's heart. I confessed my love for Fleur, leaving Esmeralda shattered and betrayed. The pain in her eyes was unbearable, and I realized the depth of my cruelty.


It was then that Esmeralda's eyes met Pierre's, and in that moment, she understood the truth. Her heart had never truly belonged to me; it had always been with Pierre. The poet, minstrel, and playwright who had been by her side all along, watching her dance and collecting coins from the crowd.


In the midst of her heartbreak, Esmeralda found solace in Pierre's arms. He held her gently, wiping away her tears, and promising to protect her from the pain I had caused. Their love blossomed, fueled by the shared understanding of heartache and the desire for a genuine connection.


As I reflect upon the events that unfolded, I realize the consequences of my actions. I was a fool, blinded by my own desires and the thrill of conquest. I had hurt Esmeralda, a woman whose heart was pure and whose love was true.


Now, as I watch from afar, I see Esmeralda and Pierre, their love shining brightly amidst the chaos of Paris. And I am left with the bitter taste of regret, knowing that I had lost something precious – the chance to love and be loved in return.


The author's comments:

good story.


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