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I Won't

June 22, 2010
By midnightelement SILVER, Queens Village, New York
midnightelement SILVER, Queens Village, New York
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"This is who I've been hiding and she's dying to be set free"


Your Love


It was raining, pouring actually I could barely see a block ahead of me. On top of that it was dark and cold. If I ever make home its guaranteed that I will have a cold. I pulled my coat around me to try to find some kind of warmth, even though it was soaked along with everything on me.


Cutting through the darkness was a pair of headlights, I kept on walking but the lights came closer until I saw the car. I turned to see who it was hoping that it was my dad, no such luck.
“ Hey” the guy said. “Do you need a ride?”
“ No thanks”
“ It’s raining pretty hard”
“ And you’re a stranger”
“ True, but I wont hurt you”
I smiled to myself how honest.” I don’t know that but thanks for the offer”
“ I mean it”
“ so do I .” I said looking at him, I saw him smile.
“ ok, but heads up there’s a diner a few blocks away if you get there you might be able to dry off a little.”
“ yea I know, thanks anyway.”
“ no problem” he said driving away.


If that wasn’t odd then I don’t know what is.



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on Jul. 15 2010 at 9:34 am
midnightelement SILVER, Queens Village, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"This is who I've been hiding and she's dying to be set free"

thanks you guys i'll keep writing then.

on Jul. 2 2010 at 6:40 am
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker<br /> We cannot change the cards we&#039;re dealt just how we play the hand<br /> Experience is what you get when you didn&#039;t get what you wanted<br /> It&#039;s pretty easy to be smart when you&#039;re parroting smart people<br /> -Randy Pausch

Of course:)

on Jul. 2 2010 at 12:36 am
Chinadoll BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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Agreed :) I would like to see where it goes from here. Great start!

Also will you check out some of my work?


on Jul. 1 2010 at 6:48 am
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1752 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker<br /> We cannot change the cards we&#039;re dealt just how we play the hand<br /> Experience is what you get when you didn&#039;t get what you wanted<br /> It&#039;s pretty easy to be smart when you&#039;re parroting smart people<br /> -Randy Pausch

That was cute, well-described and interesting.  Nice job.  Keep writing!

Btw, will you check out and comment on my work?