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July 26, 2010
By Anonymous

Why can’t we be together? He walks around school like he doesn’t even know I am alive…but he does. We used to live in a world of stolen kisses and secret affairs. Love so passionate it put every love story to shame. But the truth of it is he’s a jock and I am the girl nobody knows. So invisible I don’t even get bullied…I hate it! I want to be with him so badly and I know he wants to be with me but he says he can’t! why?! What is he hiding?! What’s his secret!? When he’s alone I see him staring at me, with a sadness and longing in his eyes. It kills me every time I see it. Like my heart is being shattered again. I hear a sharp rasp at my window. I get off my bad and run to the window, and their he is. His red brown hair is falling onto his face and cold blue eyes that sent chills down my spine. He has a grin on his face that makes my heart melt. I move over and let him in. he climbs through the window and lands on the ground with a thud. I just keep staring its all I can do. He scrambles to his feet ”hey”. ”what do you want?” I say a little too sharply. He stares at me his eyes pleading. ”don’t be that way I came to tell you bye.” I stare my mouth gaping. ”what do you mean bye?” he sits on his feet. “Rachel I’m leaving.” I could tell the words hurt to say. “im moving and never coming back. I’m. I’m sorry.” I can feel the hot tears sliding down my face. He comes over in one graceful movement and kisses the tears away. I collapses in to him. “why? Why are you leaving?” I plead.” its just my time to go” he kisses me on the lips with such passion such force it makes me want to melt. After what seems like hours he whispers “I love in” and walks back to the window and leaves. When I can move again I run to the window hoping to get one last glimpse of him but all I see is a lone wolf with the same eyes as Tommy. “Tommy?” he nods and runs into the night.


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lamelola GOLD said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 10:02 pm
lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
The problem is, you think you have time.

You should keep writing, adn make a sequel to the story :) good work.

on Aug. 4 2010 at 10:28 am
foreveroctober GOLD, Pompton Plains, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Life, he realized, was much like a song. In the beginning there is mystery, in the end there is confirmation, but it's the middle where all the emotion resides to make the whole thing worthwhile." - The Last Song, Nicholas Sparks

Great job!!!! I felt so bad for Rachel. Your writing is very good!!!!

If you could please check out some of my work, preferably my free verse poem- Far From Perfect. Thanks!!!!!!


on Aug. 3 2010 at 4:49 pm
emoVamp247 BRONZE, Port Saint Lucie, Florida
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that was nice i love it!

on Aug. 2 2010 at 11:12 pm
HippieNamedAnna PLATINUM, Kansas City, Missouri
21 articles 7 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let It Be-The Beatles
Music is the only thing that makes sense any more-Me
Make love, not war-a bunch of people
Roses are red, Violets are blue, I have five fingers, The middle one's for you-Me :)

wow i was really entertained!

TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 12:16 am
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.







-carol burnett

Love it! really relative!! Greatt work!