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A Boy

November 17, 2010
By emmernemmer PLATINUM, Stockton, California
emmernemmer PLATINUM, Stockton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"the pen is mightier than the sword"


I wasn’t expecting to like it here. After all, I had no boyfriend, only a couple old friends from summer camp whom live here by coincidence, and I didn’t want to come here anyway.

Then I walked into my new high school. Then I saw him. He had black hair that was falling I his face, green eyes, and was putting books into his locker. I saw no one else to ask where my locker was (purposely). So I walked up to him.

“Excuse me.” I said.

“Yes?” He replied.

“Where is locker 214?” I asked.

“Right here.” He pointed to the locker next to his.

“Okay, thanks.” I began to open it.

“Your new, right.”

“Yeah.”

“I’m Kyle.” He stuck his hand out.

“Courtney.” I shook his hand.

“So um, I was wondering, if you might want to go out sometime?” He sad uneasily.

“Really? Sure.” I said smiling.

My life here was now beginning.



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on Nov. 21 2010 at 11:27 am
emmernemmer PLATINUM, Stockton, California
25 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the pen is mightier than the sword"

Ok thanks ill work on it mayb ill post a: A Boy (edited)

on Nov. 21 2010 at 10:02 am
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

great start, but definitely too short. the boy would never ask so quickly, try to make it longer, they run into eachother, silly things happen, he asks her out, etc. but good start :)