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February 2, 2011
By KatreenaMarie PLATINUM, Fresno, California
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KatreenaMarie PLATINUM, Fresno, California
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&quot;We will fight, or we will fall, until the angels save us all&quot;<br /> Hollywood Undead

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Sometimes I find myself watching you.

There's something about you that attracts my attention. Something that calls to my heart. I hear the call, and it's just too strong, I can't ignore it.

Sometimes, I find myself watching you.
Watching the way your hand writes across the page, knowing it will never be my name.
Watching the way your hair falls into your eyes, knowing I will never be the one to brush it away.
Watching the way your feet shuffle along the concrete, knowing I will never be the one walking along beside you. Watching the way your hand hangs limp by your side, knowing I will never be the one holding it.

Sometimes, I find myself watching you.

Watching you, knowing you will never be mine.

© Kristy K., Milford, CT

The author's comments:
No, this is not in a creepy satlker way. Have you ever had someone that you couldn't help but glance a them?
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KatreenaMarie PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 19 2011 at 2:04 pm
KatreenaMarie PLATINUM, Fresno, California
32 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We will fight, or we will fall, until the angels save us all&quot;<br /> Hollywood Undead

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haha yeah sort of.....lmao he came out of the closet XD no wonder i didnt stand a chance bahahahahhahahahah
MKimmi said...
on Mar. 30 2011 at 4:41 pm
MKimmi, NY, New York
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like the song i dont know the title, by taylor swift! rite?
KatreenaMarie PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 9:11 pm
KatreenaMarie PLATINUM, Fresno, California
32 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We will fight, or we will fall, until the angels save us all&quot;<br /> Hollywood Undead

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he does, but they keep going off and on, and he just keeps getting hurt
MKimmi said...
on Feb. 6 2011 at 7:14 pm
MKimmi, NY, New York
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so he doesn't have a girlfriend already? and then like some day, the world will be clear, right? are you going to write a story based on this?
KatreenaMarie PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 5 2011 at 8:30 pm
KatreenaMarie PLATINUM, Fresno, California
32 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We will fight, or we will fall, until the angels save us all&quot;<br /> Hollywood Undead

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yeah, i guess....but i would rather have him realize it on his own, and come to me, than for me to force him to open his eyes too soon
MKimmi said...
on Feb. 5 2011 at 8:07 pm
MKimmi, NY, New York
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oh, i get it now

thats sad

Volleystar15 GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2011 at 11:58 am
Volleystar15 GOLD, Wauconda, Illinois
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&quot;You asked me what was wrong, i smiled and said NOTHING.<br /> Then i turned around and whispered EVERYTHING.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;When i see you smile and know that is not for me, that is when i miss you the most.&quot;

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this is so relatable, not stalkerish at all. haha its so true the words you wrote!
AmazingGrace88 GOLD said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 11:43 pm
AmazingGrace88 GOLD, Lake Oswego, Oregon
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No boys are worth your tears,<br /> and the ones who are wont make you cry.

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Really well written, keep up the good work!
KatreenaMarie PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 8:35 pm
KatreenaMarie PLATINUM, Fresno, California
32 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We will fight, or we will fall, until the angels save us all&quot;<br /> Hollywood Undead

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then i would admit to the world that i was wrong....but he just got back with his ex, who keeps hurting him, and he just cant understand why he keeps getting hurt....
MKimmi said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 7:02 pm
MKimmi, NY, New York
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What if like, by some chance, you get to be with the person?
Chitra.I PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 10:52 am
Chitra.I PLATINUM, Dubai, Other
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Everything makes sense if you think too much about it.

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I've thought all of this SO MANY TIMES...

read my mind much? :P

This is such a good way to put that empty, hollow kind of disappointment. Good job.

Check out some of my stuff? Thanks!

KatreenaMarie PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 3 2011 at 5:58 pm
KatreenaMarie PLATINUM, Fresno, California
32 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We will fight, or we will fall, until the angels save us all&quot;<br /> Hollywood Undead

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thanks you guys :D
SilverLuna SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2011 at 5:10 pm
SilverLuna SILVER, _________, Washington
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&quot;Come fairies take me out of this dull world, for I would ride with you upon the wind and dance upon the mountains like a flame.&quot;.... W.B. Yeats.<br /> &quot;Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss.&quot; - Douglas Adams

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This is incredibly true, you have no idea how well I can relate to this. It's like, when your eyes have no place else to be, that's where they go, and when they're looking at something else, that's where they want to be. Great job!
aylinnnz GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2011 at 2:28 pm
aylinnnz GOLD, Bronx, New York
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&quot;Maybe no one&#039;s really crazy. Everyone is just a little bit mad. How much depends on where you fall in the spectrum. How much depends on how lucky you are.&quot; - Joshua Walters

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This is so good and tru!:) like it. Read my stuff?