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Betrayal

January 12, 2009
By Anonymous

It is unfair. She longs to be free of what constrains her, to taste the forbidden fruit. He is the serpent, and she is curious. Unknowingly he tempts her, proffering the apple she so longs to taste. But she can’t. She cannot shatter the Eden she lives in, for it all that she knows. Taking the fruit he offers, savoring it, will cast her into a world without shelter and love. And unlike Eve, there will be no Adam to guide her.



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on May. 5 2011 at 1:13 pm
TheBlackRose BRONZE, Madrid, Other
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I knew who I was this morning, but I´ve changed a few times since then

Nice narration, I like the way you write the story.

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on Dec. 20 2010 at 8:57 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
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i like it i loved how you used historical references to give alot of people something to connecct to

on Nov. 15 2010 at 4:49 pm
Ashley Kristine Bueckert, Manitoba, Other
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wow...i like it. its just like the bible!

on Oct. 13 2010 at 8:37 pm
mrvillamor BRONZE, Dasmarinas City, Other
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"Don't do unto others what you don't want others to do unto you."

Not bad. I'm curious on what happened.

on Sep. 16 2010 at 6:19 pm
Minnimouse SILVER, Elizabeth, Colorado
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i think that the forbidden fruit thing is a little cliche you should try rewording it to make it your own

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on Aug. 30 2010 at 9:28 am
sbear406 GOLD, Summit, New Jersey
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love it!!

on Mar. 13 2010 at 9:39 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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&quot;I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, &#039;I have always thought that but never found the words for it.&#039;&quot; -anonymous

Wow, this absolutely fantastic! Probably one of the best things I've read on this site. Five stars! Great work.

on Jan. 13 2010 at 10:23 pm
weirdonpurpose SILVER, Georgetown, Texas
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WOW i loved this!! you are so talented to get your idea, and emotion, and mood all across in so few words!! bravo!! :D