Death Has Its Heart in the Right Place | Teen Ink

Death Has Its Heart in the Right Place

March 14, 2009
By Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments

Looking down the barrel of a gun is a strange feeling, but after staring into Death's dark face so many times, Jack had become accustomed to the tickles and prickles that run across your spine. It had become a familiar, a common, an ordinary feeling. He almost liked it, the sensation, of Death looming about, waiting for the perfect moment to strike. To him, it was intoxicating. It made his heart race, his blood pump and adrenaline run. It was like being in love for the first time, and the last. Yet every time that the Reaper swung his scythe on the mob boss, he always seemed to stop, never finishing the job. It was as though he, Death, took pleasure in seeing Jack sweat under his blade. They both enjoyed the mad thrill, but it seemed that this would be the last time they would saviour it.
Bang! The thunderous roar of the gun shattered the calm night. It was over.
'Here. You can keep it,' the assassin tossed the smoking gun onto Jack's cold lap.
A sinister smile cut the killer's face. Raising his chin proudly, as a young boy does after winning a prize, the mercenary turned around slowly, savouring his victory. Now all he had to do was collect his pay and live comfortably on some exotic island for the rest of his life, without worries, without problems, without necessities, without ' Bang! A second shot.
The assassin's knees broke under the pain. One moment he was savouring glory and the next he was savouring the bitter sweet taste of warm steel, the killer kiss of a bullet. On all fours, he lifted his trembling hand up to his chest: his shirt was soaked in blood that was spewing out on both sides of his trunk. He was cold, weak, in pain. Frozen sweat poured down his face as his insides burnt in anguish.
Writhing on the floor with no strength at all, he turned around to see who the shooter was. Behind him, sitting in the same leather-cushion seat he had been sitting when the assassin came in, Jack sat. The only difference was that now his right arm was outstretched with his fingers curled around the gun. His eyelids were heavy upon his red eyes, but he still maintained them wide open.
'No ' Impossible ' I shot you ' I shot you in the heart.'
Jack licked his lips and explained slowly, enjoying every word, 'I am dextrocardi-ac.'


Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 612 comments.


on Oct. 21 2010 at 8:49 pm
Rainbowmadhatter, Reno, Nevada
0 articles 0 photos 81 comments

u have anything else written??????

 


on Oct. 21 2010 at 5:12 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments
Someone whose heart (-cardiac) is located on the right (dextro-) side of their body. Thanks for reading!

on Oct. 21 2010 at 5:11 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments
Glad you enjoyed!

on Oct. 21 2010 at 10:42 am
vampiresrock GOLD, Cornish, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you oranges, make grape juice and sit back and let the world wounder how the hell you just did that.

your welcome

on Oct. 20 2010 at 11:25 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
34 articles 2 photos 658 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t punish yourself,&quot; she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing.&quot;<br /> --Markus Zusak, &quot;The Book Thief&quot;

What's a dextrocardiac?

on Oct. 20 2010 at 8:15 pm
Rainbowmadhatter, Reno, Nevada
0 articles 0 photos 81 comments

bravo verry verry gooooodddd

 


on Oct. 20 2010 at 4:23 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments
Thank you!

on Oct. 20 2010 at 10:42 am
vampiresrock GOLD, Cornish, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you oranges, make grape juice and sit back and let the world wounder how the hell you just did that.

Niiiiiiice! your so discriptive, i felt like i was there! Bravo!

on Oct. 12 2010 at 9:29 am
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments
Just read your "Love is Betrayal". Really good! Go ahead, no problem with the dextro. Glad you enjoyed mine so much!

on Oct. 12 2010 at 9:04 am
DarknessForever13 SILVER, Gainesville, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoth the Raven: &quot;Nevermore!&quot;<br /> &quot;What&#039;s right isn&#039;t always popular, but what&#039;s popular isn&#039;t always right.&quot; - Unknown

It's me again, I can't get enough of this story! My thriller/action fiction story was posted and 2 people have veiwed i. Would you mind taking a look at it? The title is, "Love Is Betrayal, Betrayal Is Love." Once again, I love this article, do you mind if I use the Dextrocardiac part in one of writings?

on Oct. 1 2010 at 4:58 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments
I'm happy you enjoyed it. I would be more than glad to read it. Just let me know when you publish it and I will be more than happy to check it out. Thanks for your comment!

on Oct. 1 2010 at 4:55 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments
Thanks! Glad you liked it

on Oct. 1 2010 at 3:19 pm
DarknessForever13 SILVER, Gainesville, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoth the Raven: &quot;Nevermore!&quot;<br /> &quot;What&#039;s right isn&#039;t always popular, but what&#039;s popular isn&#039;t always right.&quot; - Unknown

Wow! This is amazing! I'm not trying to be selfabsorbed or sound like a begger-child, but I am going to post an article soon, I am not sure about the title, but it will be my firt\st one to post on here, would you read it, please? I need another writers opinion, desperatly.

Rachie_P. GOLD said...
on Oct. 1 2010 at 10:49 am
Rachie_P. GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
11 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
don&#039;t spend your life hiding from the monsters under your bed&gt; go out and enjoy life to the fullest

i didn't know wat dextro cardiac was and so i looked it up and it's extremly cool. nice use of vocab :)

 


on Sep. 29 2010 at 10:58 am
hey peoplee(:

on Sep. 28 2010 at 9:14 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments
I'm happy you liked it! I am not sure I understand what you mean by "blockily". Could you please explain? Thanks again for commenting and for the feedback. It's always a great help.

on Sep. 28 2010 at 9:11 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments
I am glad you enjoyed it.

on Sep. 28 2010 at 9:10 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments
Dextrocardiac means that ones heart is situated on the right side of the torax instead of on the left (hence, the bullet did not kill him).

on Sep. 28 2010 at 9:09 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments
Thanks, took me a while to make it up.

Tim-.- SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2010 at 8:27 pm
Tim-.- SILVER, Markham, Other
8 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
We all screw up sometimes, just some people more than others

It seems the writing lacks a bit of flow, in my opinion. Its also a bit blockily structured, not sure if you were going for that or not. But I loved the ending :D