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Death Has Its Heart in the Right Place

March 14, 2009
By Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
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Looking down the barrel of a gun is a strange feeling, but after staring into Death's dark face so many times, Jack had become accustomed to the tickles and prickles that run across your spine. It had become a familiar, a common, an ordinary feeling. He almost liked it, the sensation, of Death looming about, waiting for the perfect moment to strike. To him, it was intoxicating. It made his heart race, his blood pump and adrenaline run. It was like being in love for the first time, and the last. Yet every time that the Reaper swung his scythe on the mob boss, he always seemed to stop, never finishing the job. It was as though he, Death, took pleasure in seeing Jack sweat under his blade. They both enjoyed the mad thrill, but it seemed that this would be the last time they would saviour it.
Bang! The thunderous roar of the gun shattered the calm night. It was over.
'Here. You can keep it,' the assassin tossed the smoking gun onto Jack's cold lap.
A sinister smile cut the killer's face. Raising his chin proudly, as a young boy does after winning a prize, the mercenary turned around slowly, savouring his victory. Now all he had to do was collect his pay and live comfortably on some exotic island for the rest of his life, without worries, without problems, without necessities, without ' Bang! A second shot.
The assassin's knees broke under the pain. One moment he was savouring glory and the next he was savouring the bitter sweet taste of warm steel, the killer kiss of a bullet. On all fours, he lifted his trembling hand up to his chest: his shirt was soaked in blood that was spewing out on both sides of his trunk. He was cold, weak, in pain. Frozen sweat poured down his face as his insides burnt in anguish.
Writhing on the floor with no strength at all, he turned around to see who the shooter was. Behind him, sitting in the same leather-cushion seat he had been sitting when the assassin came in, Jack sat. The only difference was that now his right arm was outstretched with his fingers curled around the gun. His eyelids were heavy upon his red eyes, but he still maintained them wide open.
'No ' Impossible ' I shot you ' I shot you in the heart.'
Jack licked his lips and explained slowly, enjoying every word, 'I am dextrocardi-ac.'


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Jaco said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 8:48 am
Well done!

BenH said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 4:56 pm
Keep on penning! Thirsty for more.

Bertie said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 4:55 pm
Always love a good thriller with an unaexpected twist at the end. Well done.

Lenny said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 4:54 pm
If you have any poems then share those with us too!

MyrFe said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 4:53 pm
Great Masterpiece! Want to read more!

MisDan said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 4:51 pm
Reminds of another great mystery/murder story you once worte, ya great if you would post that one too. Lets see the mercury rise!

Bobby said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 4:49 pm
Dextrocardiac! WOW! What an ending

Leo K said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:18 pm
Are you and Makena B "Guilty Stains" relatives?

on Jul. 26 2010 at 2:03 pm
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments
Será un placer. Muchas gracias por tu comentario. ¡Me alegro que te haya gustado!

FaiT said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 1:49 pm
Accurate and precise, the best!

july mcniven said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 12:50 pm
Sorry, I tried to write, What precise is your desciption. Very goog story.

july mcniven said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 12:48 pm
What precise are you!

MiHeyn said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 12:35 pm
What comes next? And more important, WHEN?!

LeaS said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 12:33 pm
Surprise ending if I ever saw one!

bobun16 SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 12:07 pm
bobun16 SILVER, Mesa, Arizona
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JJathome said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 11:33 am
Hey boy looking forward for your next piece! Perhaps something with chemistry or physics would be cool...

JJFF said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 7:04 am
Witty and creative!

Cloe said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 6:50 am
Wonderful!

Roby said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 8:23 pm
Great! Great! Great!

Jumy said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 7:44 pm
Really good.