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Did You Love Me To?

May 13, 2012
By TemperanceBrennan SILVER, Winnipeg, Other
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"Once you understand that the universe is ever expanding wearing stripes with plaid is easy"- Albert Einstein

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I remember staring at the cars below me from the overpass. Did you know what I was thinking? Or had it been pure chance that you had been there, that day. I remember the fear gripping me as I pulled myself over the railing and stared down at my fate. Had you felt fear to? Fear that you would lose me. I remember taking a deep breath before letting go. Did you think before you ran towards me, begging me to stop? Or was it just in the heat of the moment. I remember you helping me back over the rail before I jumped. Did you actually care? Or did you simply not want blood on your hands. I remember you holding me close to you while I cried onto your shoulder. Did I scare you half as much as you said I did? Or was it just a little white lie. I remember loving you. Did you love me too?

© Caroline B., Haworth, NJ

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I am dedicating this to one of my best friends, who saved me from myself.
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DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 22 2012 at 6:50 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

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Your poem was really good. i liked your first sentences that brought my attention. Suggestion maybe go in a little bit detial at the end. Good Job!!
TemperanceBrennan SILVER said...
on May. 22 2012 at 6:41 pm
TemperanceBrennan SILVER, Winnipeg, Other
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Once you understand that the universe is ever expanding wearing stripes with plaid is easy&quot;- Albert Einstein

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Please leave comments so I know how to improve!!!