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Vengeance

January 28, 2012
By Tbug1997 PLATINUM, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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Tbug1997 PLATINUM, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
29 articles 1 photo 39 comments

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When in doubt... Blame it on your siblings <br /> when life gives you skittles throw them at random people and yell FEEL THE RAINBOW

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Vivian has to put up with her up coming wedding, school, friends, enemies and death

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This book has 9 comments.

Freckles3 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 7 2013 at 8:39 pm
Freckles3 BRONZE, ------------, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 32 comments

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&quot;The universe is not only queerer than we suppose; it is queerer than we can suppose.&quot;<br /> ~J.B.S. Haldane

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Haha, it's okay. I thought I had gone back in time or something! ;) Anyway, this is really great! I love the characters! Keep it up!
Tbuggy said...
on Mar. 7 2013 at 1:38 pm
Tbuggy, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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this is a really late reply and im sorry but my orignal account got lost but yes the third and fourth got copied somehow
Freckles3 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 15 2012 at 6:17 pm
Freckles3 BRONZE, ------------, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The universe is not only queerer than we suppose; it is queerer than we can suppose.&quot;<br /> ~J.B.S. Haldane

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Really good plot... But am I just imagining it... Or is the third chapter the same as the fourth? Am I going crazy?
ILoveWritingAlot BRONZE said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 5:20 am
ILoveWritingAlot BRONZE, E, Other
3 articles 5 photos 57 comments

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Every end is a new beginning;<br /> What a caterpillar calls an end the rest of the world calls a butterfly;<br /> There never was a good war, or a bad peace.;<br /> &ldquo;People will believe anything if you whisper it.&rdquo;<br /> &ldquo;Where words fail, Music speaks&rdquo;

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wow! nice...i'd be glad if you'd check my book too :)
readaholic PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 11 2012 at 10:24 am
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
27 articles 0 photos 425 comments

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I&#039;d rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up<br /> ~Jhonen Vasquez

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It's good, but the lack of punctuaion honestly gets a little distracting and makes the story hard to follow. Same goes for the grammar issues, I mean, this story feels like it was written almost in text-speak! The story somehow just feels...incomplete, like too much is happening without a breath or explaination. On the plus side, love the ideas and action! Makes me want more! KEEP WRITING! :)
raeee GOLD said...
on Feb. 7 2012 at 5:48 pm
raeee GOLD, Walla Walla, Georgia
15 articles 3 photos 62 comments

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&quot;Would she hear me if I called her name? Would she hold me if she knew my shame? Would she even love me if I was to blame?&quot; -Favourite poem ever&hearts;

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I absolutely LOVED it. All of it. True, there are some puncuation errors and such, but fantastic nonetheless .
.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 4:47 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 569 comments

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Came back to reread, it is missing some things such as question marks in the questions, along with some tiny minor mistakes, But I got the decently written story, way to go, i like your style !
.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 12:19 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 569 comments

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Cool like Hidden said, Extreme Awesomeness, I loved your beautiful, I have lots of favorite parts, I like the way things are described 'A sun Gasping' Cleverly written, Honestly 5/5 !
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 1 2012 at 5:04 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
39 articles 0 photos 177 comments

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Theres so many that I can&#039;t pick sorry

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Awesomeness ^_^