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If I kissed you...
Summary:
The killer turned his head to me, his dark, chiseled face giving me a small grin. “I'm going to kill your weak little boyfriend.” he breathed, trying to get me to react. I did, not caring, shaking my head no, pleading with my eyes.
“Hah!” he laughed at me and wrapped his large hands around John's throat. Tears streamed down my face. “NO! NO!”
And then the shears were planted into his shoulder. He let out a roar of anger as he fell back, off John his head landing near my feet. I raised my feet and landed them, hard as I could on his skull. His head re-vibrated off the floor boards and settled back as his eyes slowly closed. John ran to me ripping off the tape, I screamed from the pain. “John he's tied us all up! Get the shears, baby, get the shears!”
Katherine A.
If I kissed you...
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Usually I don’t really read this sort of thing, but today has been an exception.
This is AMAZING!!... I saw your thread about reading only two pages and that was my intention but I couldn't help but continue reading this wicked novel.
You so need to write part three & continue the story!...
I particularly like the way you use repetition of words, it familiarises the reader with the text and allows for them to be reminded and recall previous parts that they have already read. The flashback use is brill, I loved the way they just seamlessly blended into each other and you could tell that they were in there for a reason, not because you just thought it to be a good idea at the time.
Plot is well written, the characters are great, the setting is described with ease, the suspense kept me on edge… I don’t think I could have asked for much more and of course 5/5!!
Thank you for allowing me to read this book, NamesKill. :)
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Oh good-that part of about them possibly being related was something I'd been wondering about. I was worried I had made the plot too twisted, but I'm glad you liked it. That was a flashback-with them dancing in the car on their way to their destination across the Nevada desert-and I know the flashbacks can be confusing for some people. As for the moment they got caught, I thought I'd include it as another flashback at a crucial moment in the character's (Kim's) survival to make it more intense. I don't think the plot is loose...but we all have our own opinions and I respect your's :-)
By the way, if you're a member on here and want me to comment on a piece of your work, just say so, and I'll return the favor.
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