“Talea” the author of this story made it so you felt like you were there. It was as if you were seeing everything through the character's eye. “My eyes roamed the bloody floor and stopped upon a still body.” She really makes it seem like you’re in the story too. I was very surprised by this story and how well it was written. It was written very well like an adult wrote it. I was a little confused at first because I did not know it was fiction. So I looked it up and found nothing related to what her story was talking about. But some of the stuff she talked about is going on right now. “The man threw my father to the ground and he tried reaching for his knife. Just then the other man charged at him with a long spear and drove it through his chest. Blood splatter  from my father's mouth and more of it spread to the floor.” I over all loved this story and found it very interesting.