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Cupid's Fool

May 14, 2009
By SweetxTears SILVER, Buffalo, New York
SweetxTears SILVER, Buffalo, New York
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you said you love me
i say you never care
you say you'll protect me
but you left me waiting here
you claim I'm the cheater
but i heard you slept with my sister
you said it could only be you and i
or we could break up and not deal with all the useless tries.
but i'm tired of all these lies.
and midnight cries.
i will regret dating you for the rest of my life.
you were the enemy, a pond, a tool.
and you treated me like i was cupid's fool.


The author's comments:
this piece is something i thought about after i saw my two dearest friends breakup because one was cheating on another.

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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 5 2011 at 5:04 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I like the context of it and the title but I didn't especially care for the rhyme scheme... it wasn't a bad poem, though.

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