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Left behind
May 20, 2009
What's done is done.
Time is closing in.
I will dissapear in misery.
He will stay with golden tears.
Till once more we are together again.
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This article has 11 comments.
booksarelife4me SILVER said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:56 pm
thanks... *grins*
Lightning93 said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:31 pm
You think I've been pretending this whole time that you were my friend? 'course I do silly!
booksarelife4me SILVER said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:27 pm
on your wall?!?! *feels honored * SARA!!!!!!! *hugtackles * You do love me!
Lightning93 said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:22 pm
it is =) I still have the poem you gave me for my B-day on my wall. =)
booksarelife4me SILVER said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:20 pm
aww thanks Sara gonan make me blush...
booksarelife4me SILVER said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:19 pm
thanks! for a second I was like Myself who is that?? but then the Sahara gave it away =P...I'm blabbering...I shouldn't babble...this is supposed to be a comment...*Shuts up*
Lightning93 said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:16 pm
this is great girl!! but all your work is.. ^_^
Myself said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 9:11 pm
It's reall beautiful, Sahara! short, sweet, and to the point. :)
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 6:00 pm
Lovin it!!!!
thanks again for the comment. i like this poem, its very short and poingant. i would consider not putting periods at the end of all the sentences. it's up to you, but sometimes in poetry periods slow it down or make it choppy and you don't always need them.
Fashionista828 PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 23 2009 at 11:59 pm
Hey thanks for the comment on my story. You know "Pressure" was supposed to go right into my other story "Thanksgiving......Family Style". But then I decided to seperate them. I love this poem! it's so short but sweet. Thanks bye!
