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June 23, 2021
By Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
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Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

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Please,

One person,

Speak to me

On this collapsing playground of horrors!

All my life I’ve been pleading

For one hand to hold,

Walking on the outside of hand-holders

Whose togetherness

Is only meant for two,

Not me.

One person,

Help me!

When I thought myself alone

Last December

The shock of a friend’s heart

Served me to remember

Lone plus lone

Equals the together number

Two—

When you think yourself alone

Be aware of your brother

Sometime the pain of another

Will pull you through.

© Mitra G., Boulder, CO

The author's comments:

This is to say thank you to SparrowSun for her beautiful poem she wrote about me, "O." Thank you so much!

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SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Jun. 27 2021 at 10:41 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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it went 0, One... so i added a շ. that turned out to be more of a four...
SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Jun. 27 2021 at 10:19 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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(abt to further break the universe)
SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Jun. 27 2021 at 9:05 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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help- me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ohh the pain!!!!
Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Jun. 27 2021 at 5:57 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
179 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

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Nooooo
SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Jun. 27 2021 at 4:53 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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lol- wait whats that heat? why is it coming fro under me? and above me? *looks around and sees everything turning red hot and then the universe exploding in a fiery bang* by-!
Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Jun. 27 2021 at 4:27 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
179 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

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Don't. Don't say thank you to a thank you poem, or it will just go on and on and space-time will shift and we might end up in a black hole. Well, anyhow, thank you--AH! NO! (Mental breakdown)...
SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Jun. 27 2021 at 3:30 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

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woah thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(as soon as i read the sidenote i sent firststeps a long excited comment. or it would have been long but then I got distracted reading it(: thanks!)