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A Piece of Me

June 22, 2009
By Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

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Everything I write,
Contains a piece of me,
Shining extra bright,
In my poetry,

My love and my pain,
My hopes and dreams,
Over and over again,
I explore these themes.

Poetry is emotion,
Written out,
No restraint or caution,
On what you write about.

So when you read my poetry,
Treat it like you would treat me.

The author's comments:
I love poetry! It lets my soul fly free! (and now I'm rhyming!)
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This article has 7 comments.

ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jul. 18 2010 at 7:20 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

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this is really good , and is well written! keep it up . please check out and rate some of the work I've done :) thanks
windswift DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 6:05 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

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i love this poem, it tells of what the very essance of poetry is, and that to truly get the meaning in the words, you must convey the emotions behind the words, your writing has greatly improved since i read your first poem, keep it up, you should think about putting together a book of your poems to be published, you would make it there, just keep writing, and never stop five of five

 

Rosalie PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 5:39 am
Rosalie PLATINUM, Maryville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
-you have many to learn but nothing to lose.<br /> -the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else...<br /> -good girls are bad girls that dont get caught.

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i love this!
Inkspired PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 16 2009 at 5:07 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

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Yes, I do! I have two posted right now!
EdytD SILVER said...
on Aug. 28 2009 at 2:15 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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Neat! I really like the idea, and I think with a bit more graphic imagery this poem could go a long way. If you make your ideas physical objects, for example, it would really seem to be, literally, a "piece of you." Great job!



I'd love if you took a look at my work; thanks!
ErumK said...
on Aug. 28 2009 at 1:08 pm
ErumK, Bayan, Other
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I love the last two lines, really show how much you love poetry. Do you ever write stories?
Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 18 2009 at 7:01 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s no fun if you&#039;re not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant.&quot; -Moi

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This is awesome, it really shows how it feels to write poetry. (Thanks for the comment!)

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