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ARE YOU SERIOUS!?!?!?!

October 12, 2009
By Springer10 SILVER, South Charleston, Ohio
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Springer10 SILVER, South Charleston, Ohio
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No dreams can compare to the reality I have with you.<br /> <br /> - M. Pellowski -

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Are you serious?!?!?

All this stuff you tell me
Do you really mean it?
Or are you just playing
With my emotions, just
Like all the rest of the jerks.
I thought you was different

You call me at one in
The morning, after a night
Of kicking it with your friends
Just to remind me that you
Could have had sex tonight
If you had wanted

You walk up to me and
Wrap your arms around
My waist, but you smile
At the pretty girl walking
Past saying what’s up sexy!
Are you serious?

You talk about how you wanna
Spend the rest of your life with me,
But I hear from other people that
You’re e-mailing other girls saying
You can’t wait to kick it with them
This weekend.

Well this time I am dead
Serious!! I am sick and tired
Of being played by guys I
Think are different. If you are
Serious each time you say I love you
Then prove it!!!!!

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I am sick and tired of being played by all the jerks in this world!!!
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Springer10 said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 8:46 am
I do not appreciate you leaving rude comments on something I wrote. Those are my feelings and I don't care if you dont like them but please keep them to yourself. Thanks
Springer10 SILVER said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 12:46 pm
Springer10 SILVER, South Charleston, Ohio
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No dreams can compare to the reality I have with you.<br /> <br /> - M. Pellowski -

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Ya I have already found an amazing guy who makes me feel like no other guy has. This loser lost my love forever
Rapture-Rey BRONZE said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 5:34 pm
Rapture-Rey BRONZE, Columbus, Georgia
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The pen is only mightier than the sword, if it is used by the correct writer

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awww :/ i now how ya feel hun, i just got out of a relationship of 11 months...planning on going to college together and what not, its okay though :D life will get better...i promise ;]
hhghgg said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 11:25 am
man this some lame stuff all yaw ust thirsty over these boys
Springer10 SILVER said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 7:58 am
Springer10 SILVER, South Charleston, Ohio
6 articles 1 photo 3 comments

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No dreams can compare to the reality I have with you.<br /> <br /> - M. Pellowski -

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Ya and just remeber that if you were meant to be together, it will work out
flyingplanes GOLD said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 2:57 pm
flyingplanes GOLD, Lumberton, New Jersey
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You are really good at poetry because all it is...is writing what you feel. Know that some guys are like this, but i promise there's hope out there.
HeavenCooley GOLD said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 11:32 am
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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i totslly agrre i just got hurt and dumped on 10-19-09 and im still hurt but i still love him i just have to no that if hes happy im happy and thats what counts and its my time to be happy(:
dylonmichael GOLD said...
on Oct. 19 2009 at 11:00 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
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i have two one is &quot;live life as if it were your last day on earth&quot; and two is &quot;never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing&quot;

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love the poem
dylonmichael GOLD said...
on Oct. 19 2009 at 11:00 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
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i have two one is &quot;live life as if it were your last day on earth&quot; and two is &quot;never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing&quot;

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it probably would but how should i know i have never been in a relationship well ones thats worth counting. i am gay and yes i have tried dating girls but i dont know if i can count them as relationships but i have never dated a guy i have been close many times but for some reason they pull back so i say screw them
Springer10 SILVER said...
on Oct. 19 2009 at 7:24 am
Springer10 SILVER, South Charleston, Ohio
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No dreams can compare to the reality I have with you.<br /> <br /> - M. Pellowski -

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LLol thx you guys:) I'm not very good at poetry so your feedback is appreciated
Sara-Zee PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 19 2009 at 12:30 am
Sara-Zee PLATINUM, Tigard, Oregon
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&ldquo;We&rsquo;re not playing pokemon here, you don&rsquo;t have to flip out okay?&rdquo;<br /> <br /> -Jack Barakat from All Time Low

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And how many good guys are getting played by stupid girls?

Maybe we should just staple papers to everyone's forehead that say 'player' or 'stay here'. That would make everything easier.

Great poem and great point.
BradleyCounts SILVER said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 11:18 pm
BradleyCounts SILVER, Lagrange, Georgia
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Good poem.....there are a few mess ups.....Yeah most guys are jerks...But there are still a few of us good ones out there...
Phantom_Girl GOLD said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 5:35 pm
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
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&quot;If it comes out of the lion&#039;s mouth...it will be on the test.&quot;<br /> -Mr. Bala

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Awesome poem. And very true. I think it could use a bit of rewording, but it's an excellent point. How many girls out there are getting played by stupid guys?