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Best Friends Forever MAG

By Anonymous

   



We've been friends now,

for quite a while.

Through ups and downs,

tears and smiles.

All those letters ending,

best friends forever.

All those ideas,

some crazy, some clever.

We shared the bad times,

and the happiness,

We know our friendship,

would be nothing less.

The times we spent together,

I'll always keep in my heart.

We know these memories,

would last from the start.

Talking for hours on the phone,

you always had good advice to loan.

So I dedicate this poem to you,

because you're a friend who has stayed true!




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foreverlove GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 1:14 pm
foreverlove GOLD, West Haven, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I don&#039;t know,<br /> I don&#039;t care.<br /> and<br /> It doesn&#039;t make<br /> Any difference!&quot;<br /> ~ Albert Einstein

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I agree its really sweet just needs more "KUZHAM!" haha :)
foreverlove GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 1:12 pm
foreverlove GOLD, West Haven, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I don&#039;t know,<br /> I don&#039;t care.<br /> and<br /> It doesn&#039;t make<br /> Any difference!&quot;<br /> ~ Albert Einstein

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thats really good and clever! :)
Torri_123 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 2:43 pm
Torri_123 BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Follow your dreams and you will achieve.&quot;

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So sweet...I really like this poem
sarawho382 said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:33 pm
sarawho382, Del Mar, California
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so cute :) i like it a lot
chocolateheartz BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:35 pm
chocolateheartz BRONZE, Bronx,NY, New York
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lol, exactly what i had in mind. was expecting something more impressive... but it was a nice simple poem that lots of people can relate to =)
byebye said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 4:49 pm
byebye, Nevermore, Other
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To be honest, I'm not sure how this was voted the top piece of today. It really wasn't "powerful" to me....that's just my opinion. Also I think that exclamation mark is a little much, but overall this poem is good. Keep writing, you have big potential!

By the way - would anyone consider taking a look at my work? Right now I have two poems in. I really need feedback to improve my writing :) Thanks!

MarissaWhitecloud SILVER said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:35 am
MarissaWhitecloud SILVER, Oskaloosa, Iowa
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I loved this. It was really good and thoughtful.
writingrox2 said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 4:21 pm
Omg, so pretty! I love writing poems about friendship! Please check out my work, screen name: writingrox2!! :)
teh_daly said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 1:30 pm
teh_daly, Killeen, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Family-<br /> We may not have it all together<br /> But together we have it all

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COULDNT PUT IT ANY OTHER WAY.... ;)
crazygal BRONZE said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 11:31 am
crazygal BRONZE, Coimbatore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot; if yu think yu can or cannot .. yu r ryt!!&quot;

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lovely!!! <3
LifesIllusion BRONZE said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 10:26 am
LifesIllusion BRONZE, Cicero, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t let your fears slow you down. Instead, chase them down and beat them.&quot;

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I really like this poem! I think everyone should have at least one best friend, or at least a good friend, like you described in this poem. :) Check out my work please!
RachelleLovesIsabela said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 1:57 am
RachelleLovesIsabela, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Ah you like the micoscope lense stuff, thats good most people look and capture the big picture as for you young one you capture all the small beautiful things creating that beautiful scenery within&quot; Mr. L-dawg

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this was powerful!
loved every second of reading it.
great work
Caban37104 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 11:10 pm
Caban37104 BRONZE, Vineland, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
You all laugh at me because I&#039;m different, yet I laugh at you because you&#039;re all the same.

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I really like this! its great =] Keep up the great workk..! 

If youd like to read more, please check out my page and let me know what you thing please..! =] Thanks a lot

SophieG. SILVER said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 11:26 am
SophieG. SILVER, St. Davids, Pennsylvania
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this poem makes me happy! Can you check out some of my work? Thanks
AksharaO said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 7:12 am
This is amazing & shows the benefits of a true friendship.
k2bebi18 said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 4:09 pm
yeah!!!!! true dhat sum do not act like dhat but they need 2 realize that
cookiegirl said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 11:15 pm
Well done:) The poem is nice. It's nice to have somewhere there for you. Or otherwise it gets lonely.
Anonymous_7 SILVER said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 9:58 pm
Anonymous_7 SILVER, Branson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
-The only time you can get away with murder is when writing a book!

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great job! this is awesome! keep writing and dont get discouraged! could you check out some of my work? thanks
BoRdIcLe BRONZE said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 1:41 pm
BoRdIcLe BRONZE, Wahiawa, Hawaii
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I agree 100%. If her friendship with this person meant a lot to her i would expect she'd use stronger words.
svanb BRONZE said...
on Sep. 1 2011 at 2:16 am
svanb BRONZE, Muscat, Other
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I agree with your feedback. It was a simple poem with simple words. With a theme as powerful as friendship, it could have had stronger use of words.