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This Secret Place

February 12, 2010
By SarahJean GOLD, Heber City, Utah
SarahJean GOLD, Heber City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Everyone's filled with art, so express yourself." - Sarah Marcy


A secret hidden place,
no know knows of where
but me, when I need my space,
when I don't know how to bear.

It's beautiful and free
no worries, no fears.
A place just for me
and you my dear.

Nothing to hide,
just love and peace.
Truth and no lies;
the lonely feeling has ceased.

A place to think,
to relax in silence.
You're mind sinks
comfortly, with no violence.

This secret place is sweet
to untangle your ropes
that hold up your heartbeat.

This place has freedom
of speech, your own mind
to open up and find
who you are
and what you stand for.

The sun shines high
up in the sky,
loving the day
before it says goodbye.

There's a place out there
for you and me,
to be free with no cares
and be who we wanna be.

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem about me and someone I love, and about the future. I can't wait to leave everyone who's so negative towards life.

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ZiRaww! SILVER said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 9:31 am
ZiRaww! SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
“Giving up doesn’t always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go. ”

I hope you find that place soon! It sounds lovely!