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Blue Bottles
Blue bottles,two blue bottles
I'm all bottled up
Blue heart, two blue hearts
I'm all in love
Blue sky, yours and mine
Two blue skies and
Flying is a white dove
Blue water, take a swim
One takes a swim when
The other can't
Blue day, cause I'm sad
Blue bottles in my hand
I'm all bottled up
Blue heart, I'm all in love
Blue sky, up above
Yours and mine my love
Blue bottles, two blue bottles
Sit in my room on the floor and
They shimmer and what more
Do I want than to not be alone
Blue bottles, two blue bottles
Just a garage sale find and
I did'nt mind
Now I look at them so truelly blue
Just like my heart is
Blue bottles, and I'm all bottled up
Blue water, I should take a swim
Blue heart, burning hot
At the thought of him
Blue water should cool me off
Once again, again
Blue water so cold and crisp
Blue sky makes up for blue wind so brisk
Blue bottles
Blue hearts
Blue life
Blue smarts
Blue sky
Blue wondering why
Blue ocean
Blue butterfly
Blue, blue
Everything is blue my darling
Life is so blue without you
I'm reaching for warmth
All I have is this blue sweater
Blue thoughts in my head
I long for when
You'll make this blueness better
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i love this! these are my two favorite parts:
Blue heart, burning hot
At the thought of him
Blue water should cool me off
Once again, again
Blue water so cold and crisp
Blue sky makes up for blue wind so brisk
I'm reaching for warmth
All I have is this blue sweater
Blue thoughts in my head
I long for when
You'll make this blueness better
and i love the "I'm all bottled up"
Hmm...I'd say the one thing that could be made better is perhaps taking away some of the lines, lines that maybe mean less to you than others, because towards the middle it starts to feel like you 'lost your way'. I mean, not lost your way forgot about what your writing, but lost your way in that it felt like too much on one topic, you know?
Sorry, I'm not all that good at constructive criticism...
