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May 11, 2010
By SlippedFromSanity PLATINUM, Aleppo, Other
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I believed.
I had hope.
But now I realize I've been deceived.
You fed me.
A big lie.
And all of my life I just didn't see.
What you've done.
To yourself.
Continueing to fight, telling yourself you've won.
I can't heal.
Anymore.
The open scars just won't seal.
All this talk.
Means nothing.
To the people who stand to point and mock.
I don't know.
What to do.
Now that I have no place to go.
I should know.
Better now.
Than to trust whatever comes out of your mouth.
I have learned.
A lesson.
Than to speak to the back that you have turned.

© Gianna V., Sewell, NJ

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fragileblackorchid SILVER said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 11:37 am
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk. <br /> -Stephen King :P<br /> The trust of the innocent is the liar&#039;s most useful tool. <br /> -Stephen King<br /> Now that we&#039;re here, <br /> It&#039;s so far away <br /> All the struggle we thought was in vain <br /> All the mistakes, <br /> One life contained <br /> They all finally start to go away <br /> Now that we&#039;re here its so far away <br /> And I feel like I can face the day <br /> I can forgive and I&rsquo;m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

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at least u get comments i only have like 3 comments haha but my art isn't all that great and yeah i work harder on my poems then my drawings too
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 12:58 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

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Very interesting, I can relate to some lines.

You are great writer as well as an amazing artist.

SlippedFromSanity PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 8 2010 at 4:42 pm
SlippedFromSanity PLATINUM, Aleppo, Other
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Haha...yeah i don't get meany comments on my writing, mostly on my art though :/

I work on harder on my writing though....:/

fragileblackorchid SILVER said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:41 pm
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk. <br /> -Stephen King :P<br /> The trust of the innocent is the liar&#039;s most useful tool. <br /> -Stephen King<br /> Now that we&#039;re here, <br /> It&#039;s so far away <br /> All the struggle we thought was in vain <br /> All the mistakes, <br /> One life contained <br /> They all finally start to go away <br /> Now that we&#039;re here its so far away <br /> And I feel like I can face the day <br /> I can forgive and I&rsquo;m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

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another good poem im surprised no one else commented the losers lol jk