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July 22, 2010
By weebnini DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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weebnini DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Done &amp; Over&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Anyone can give up, it&#039;s the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that&#039;s true strength.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth.&quot;

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WITHOUT A DAY OF REGRET
WITH MOMENTS I WILL NOT FORGET
I REMEMBER WITH ALL I HAVE LEFT
THE THINGS I LOVE THE BEST

MY LIFE IS NEAR THE END
BUT I’M AFRAID I CANNOT MEND
BUT TODAY I FINALLY FEEL OKAY
AS I LIVE IN MY LAST DAY

© Sarah R., Fort Myers, FL

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weebnini DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 7 2010 at 9:59 pm
weebnini DIAMOND, San Diego, California
55 articles 3 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Done &amp; Over&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Anyone can give up, it&#039;s the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that&#039;s true strength.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth.&quot;

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lol and then a third time! aha jk:) its alright:)
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 4:13 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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Sorry to comment twice.
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 4:12 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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I may have just been in a cheerful mood when I commented. But what I personally took from the poem was a person who was about to die, looking back on their life peacefully. Sorry to surprise you with unexpected jolliness.
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 19 2010 at 4:10 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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I may have just been in a jolly mood when I commented. But what I personally took from the poem was a person who was about to die, and looking back on their life.

They had been through good and bad times, and they were very peaceful about it. I like that idea. Sorry if I surprised you with unexpected cheerfulness.

weebnini DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 8:22 pm
weebnini DIAMOND, San Diego, California
55 articles 3 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Done &amp; Over&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Anyone can give up, it&#039;s the easiest thing in the world to do. But to hold it together when everyone else would understand if you fell apart, that&#039;s true strength.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;People should be able to say how they feel. How they really feel. Not, you know, some words that some strangers put in their mouth.&quot;

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your welcome:) sorry to ask but how so?
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 7:43 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1632 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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This poem made me very happy. Thank you for writing it.