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The Song

July 30, 2010
By ithinkijustflew BRONZE, Dreamland, Other
ithinkijustflew BRONZE, Dreamland, Other
4 articles 1 photo 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Is. 43:2; When you pass through the waters, I will be with you.


I switch it "on",
My favorite song,
Something overwhelms me.
Like a tsunami
And I'm in the middle of it
Sorry, but there's no way out.
First beat, I'm hooked
Don't care if they looked.
My legs can't help but extend; bend.
My long hair can't help it;
It refuses to stand still.
Just like the song.
Sorry, world
I think I'm gone
I was captured in a net
Called simply, "Song".



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on Jun. 13 2011 at 11:51 am
Alice_in_Wonderland GOLD, San Clemente, California
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Favorite Quote:
“I could give up, I could stay stuck, or I could move on, So I put one foot front of the other, No no no nothing’s gonna break my stride, “ –David Archuleta (The Other Side of Down)

There is just one word that describes this poem and it is , amazing. Great job! I loved it! You should definitely write more poems like this. :)

on Sep. 18 2010 at 10:05 am
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart.&quot;~William Hazlitt<br /> &quot;Be yourself, everyone else is taken.&quot;

This is beautiful. Wonderful job. Please keep on writing! If you get the chance, can you please read and critique my newest article called "Keeping Faith" It would mean a lot. Thanks so much!

on Aug. 25 2010 at 6:09 pm
MidnightWriter SILVER, Ontario, Other
6 articles 0 photos 225 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writers are a less dangerous version of the career criminal. Everywhere they go, they see the potential for the perfect crime. The difference is that writers have better self control.

It's lovely.