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Walk into Darkness

August 4, 2010
By SaraT SILVER, Escondido, California
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I Walk in the darkness
I can't stop walking
I keep going deeper and deeper
Into nothing but
Darkness
The darkness sucks my life
My soul My Life gone
Forever
The darkness cover me
Like a blanket on a bed
Until I'm covered fully
With the blanket
And I can't see where I'm going
I just keep on walking and walking
Into Darkness that surrounds me

© Hoang P., Rochester, NY

The author's comments:
This poem i made talk about sometimes you can't stop your body from walking into darkness and sometimes you can lose your souls to the darkness.
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SaraT SILVER said...
on Aug. 30 2010 at 5:49 pm
SaraT SILVER, Escondido, California
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thank you for your comment on my poem of darkness.
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 28 2010 at 5:32 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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A somewhat frightening and depressing poem, but nevertheless true. You articulated 'walking into darkness' very poetically. Well done.