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A desired love of the shakesperean kind

January 7, 2011
By Crystal6894 BRONZE, Burlington, New Jersey
Crystal6894 BRONZE, Burlington, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Every man at some point in his life is going to lose a battle. He is going to fight and he is going to lose. But what makes him a man is at the midst of that battle he does not lose himself."


I wanted you to want me forever; not just for that specific moment or period in time.
I wanted us to be like Rosalind and Orlando, not literally, but somewhere along; that line. If forever had an end we'd be standing there together, looking out at the small world behind us, this could be our forever.
I always wanted you to want me, so we could have that never-ending love. The type that made the heavens open up; above.
And this too could be our forever; our Romeo and Juliet kind of love.

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on Jan. 18 2011 at 8:48 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

Beautifulll! I can relate :) Check out some of my work sometime !

on Jan. 18 2011 at 6:14 pm
Stormyflight GOLD, Arlington, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
I finally admited God was God<br /> -C.S Lewis<br /> Humans are amphibous. Our spirit makes us eternal while the animal binds us to time.<br /> -C.S Lewis

to be honest, after the first line I wanted to navigate out of the page, but after line three you had me in a literary headlock:) I love the way you started out slow and typical and ended it with that unforseen force:) Well done, keep at it!