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Life as I know It

April 2, 2011
By Jbohn GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Jbohn GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You dont know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have..&quot; &lt;3<br /> &quot;What doesn&#039;t kill you only makes you stronger!&quot;- My Coach<br /> &quot;Forget about the past, think about the present, and dream for your future.&quot;

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When i came home, happy and smiling. You gave me the look of death, with rage in your eyes and the look of hate staring at me. You slowly get and walk towards me. The pain in my stomach and fear in my chest came back once again. The hand goes up and I fall to the ground, and tears begin to form in my eyes. The foot goes back and slams into my stomach. Rage is still in your eyes and fear in now in mine. The beatings come one after another. The unloved feeling travels through my mind, as the person who's suppose to is the one doing this. I was taught to fight back, but that makes it go on until you get tired and leave. Deep breaths in and out, as i walk up to my room. Bruises and blood are all over my body and clothes. My shirt is ripped with stains. Tears falling from my marked face, with weakness and hatred in my eyes. How could some one hurt me like that? You were suppose to protect me from pain, not give it to me. But what can i do? This is my life...

© Gretchen L., Edina, MN

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JaneT.78 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 1:10 pm
JaneT.78 BRONZE, Omaha, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I am not young enough to know everything.&quot;-Oscar Wilde<br /> &quot;Education is the best provision for the journey to old age.&quot;- Aristotle

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Wow, this is really good! Thumbs up.
Jbohn GOLD said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 1:03 pm
Jbohn GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You dont know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have..&quot; &lt;3<br /> &quot;What doesn&#039;t kill you only makes you stronger!&quot;- My Coach<br /> &quot;Forget about the past, think about the present, and dream for your future.&quot;

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thankss :)
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 9:30 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A girl doesn&#039;t need anyone who doesn&#039;t need her&quot; Marylin Monroe

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wow amazing!!!!
Jbohn GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 6:51 pm
Jbohn GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You dont know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have..&quot; &lt;3<br /> &quot;What doesn&#039;t kill you only makes you stronger!&quot;- My Coach<br /> &quot;Forget about the past, think about the present, and dream for your future.&quot;

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Lol thankss!
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 12:55 pm
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
6 articles 3 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

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This is really good!! My heart was pounding in my chest! I thought you were gonna die!!
Jbohn GOLD said...
on Dec. 10 2011 at 1:25 pm
Jbohn GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You dont know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have..&quot; &lt;3<br /> &quot;What doesn&#039;t kill you only makes you stronger!&quot;- My Coach<br /> &quot;Forget about the past, think about the present, and dream for your future.&quot;

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Thanks!! :)
youngspeare BRONZE said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 7:25 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
1 article 0 photos 273 comments

Favorite Quote:
We wouldn&#039;t ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we&#039;d all celebrate its tenacity, we&#039;d all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don&#039;t ask me why thank God and ask me how

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wow! Great piece jbohn! Keep writing..your work is awesome! 
:D xx
Jbohn GOLD said...
on Jun. 23 2011 at 4:06 pm
Jbohn GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You dont know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have..&quot; &lt;3<br /> &quot;What doesn&#039;t kill you only makes you stronger!&quot;- My Coach<br /> &quot;Forget about the past, think about the present, and dream for your future.&quot;

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thankss!! :)
gogreen1 SILVER said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 1:26 pm
gogreen1 SILVER, Gretna, Nebraska
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Wow, that's pretty good! A few grammar mess-ups, but it was relatively fine :)

Could you check out some of my work? I especially like "The Door" and "Wishes". :) Thanx~

Jbohn GOLD said...
on May. 18 2011 at 4:05 pm
Jbohn GOLD, South Plainfield, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You dont know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have..&quot; &lt;3<br /> &quot;What doesn&#039;t kill you only makes you stronger!&quot;- My Coach<br /> &quot;Forget about the past, think about the present, and dream for your future.&quot;

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Please comment my work and let me know what yu think! :)