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Snow Cinquain

June 6, 2011
By PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."


Tiny droplets flutter to the ground.
Somehow, unlike rain,
They manage to make no sound.
For children with no school, happiness is found.
In the snow, themselves they entertain.


The author's comments:
Just a cute wintery poem. Sorry, I know its Summer, but I wrote it a while ago :)

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on Jul. 17 2011 at 2:47 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

I will :) thank youu!

on Jul. 12 2011 at 10:00 pm
Having once spent an entire winter in Russia, I personally love the snow. I liked this cinquain, and am curious to see what you can write in other poetic formats. Keep them coming! ^^

on Jul. 12 2011 at 4:03 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 296 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

aww thank youu :)

on Jul. 12 2011 at 10:31 am
JustEmily PLATINUM, Cicero, Indiana
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That's HAWT!

Cute! I love the rhyming

on Jul. 4 2011 at 9:14 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 296 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

thanksss! :)

on Jul. 1 2011 at 4:46 pm
WriterGirl33 PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to not speak and let people think you are a fool, than to open your mouth and remove all doubt.

i liked it... it flowed nice.

on Jun. 30 2011 at 8:09 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 296 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

thankss :) i had a hard time with it too. it was an assignment for my creative writing class

on Jun. 30 2011 at 2:58 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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I really like it! I have a hard time writing poems in specific formats, like cinquains, so I admire people like you who can write a good poem under such restrictions.

on Jun. 30 2011 at 2:54 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

your very welcome lol:)

on Jun. 29 2011 at 5:16 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 296 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do what you want. If it&#039;s something you&#039;ll regret in the morning, sleep late.&quot;

oh and thank you lol

on Jun. 29 2011 at 5:15 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 296 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do what you want. If it&#039;s something you&#039;ll regret in the morning, sleep late.&quot;

me toooo!!

on Jun. 29 2011 at 1:38 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
27 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil.&quot; - unknown author.<br /> &quot;All that we see or seem<br /> Is but a dream within a dream.&quot; - Edgar Allan Poe

Very cute:) I always loved the snow but I don't like the cold lol, very nice work:)

sakina GOLD said...
on Jun. 29 2011 at 7:45 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See&#039;s a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u&#039;ll surely B successful in LIFE.<br /> -Hazrat Ali (A.S)

hey check out my poems.. silence and ego kills love,love kills ego.

It's in forum


on Jun. 29 2011 at 7:41 am
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 296 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do what you want. If it&#039;s something you&#039;ll regret in the morning, sleep late.&quot;

aww thankss :)

sakina GOLD said...
on Jun. 29 2011 at 7:25 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
18 articles 13 photos 173 comments

Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See&#039;s a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u&#039;ll surely B successful in LIFE.<br /> -Hazrat Ali (A.S)

Really nice:).. but it never snow's where i live.. But i would love to experience it atleast once...

And your poem helps me do so.;)


on Jun. 28 2011 at 9:15 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 296 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do what you want. If it&#039;s something you&#039;ll regret in the morning, sleep late.&quot;

aww thankss :) my dad owns a snow plowing business so we kinda love snow in my housee :P

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jun. 28 2011 at 9:11 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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This is cute. Living with unpredictable weather, I have grown to dread snow. However, I remember being younger and dreaming about snowdays so I could go outside and build a giant snow fort. This poem brought back memories haha. Keep writing!