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Onesided War

June 26, 2011
By Blackmirror SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
Blackmirror SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some quotes I really like:<br /> <br /> &quot;Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.&quot; -Aristotle<br /> &quot;Every man dies. Not every man really lives.&quot; -William Wallace<br /> &quot;Sanity is madness put to good use.&quot; -George Santayana


Have you ever thought?
Have you ever thought to see?
Have you ever thought of me?

You've never thought.
You've never known.
Is it because of this pain I've never shown?

I scream in aguish.
I cry in pain.
My hateful sounds are all in vain.

And because of you,
In my heart is this hole,
And I've let die my lonely soul.

I'm so enraged,
But so afraid.
Once close feelings see so far away.

Do you mean to do this?
Don't you know that I can feel?
Do you think my heart's always made of steel?

So for a love once true,
I'll still go along with you.
Just please don't hurt me anymore.
I can't survive this onesided war.

The author's comments:
This was written with a boy I know in mind. We were like brother and sister, until he start to abuse me emotionally. Sometimes I wish that we were still friends, but I know that won't ever happen.

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on Sep. 24 2011 at 10:50 pm
Blackmirror SILVER, Charlotte, North Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some quotes I really like:<br /> <br /> &quot;Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.&quot; -Aristotle<br /> &quot;Every man dies. Not every man really lives.&quot; -William Wallace<br /> &quot;Sanity is madness put to good use.&quot; -George Santayana

Oh wow. How did I just see this comment??

But thanks! I don't think it's my best poem, but I'm really happy that you like it! :)


Mariam.J GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 2:33 am
Mariam.J GOLD, Dubai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t have many favourite quotes , though I do love the truth that &#039;change is constant .&#039;<br /> For you , a thousand times over - Hassan , The Kite Runner<br /> If you want to leave footprints in the sands of time , don&#039;t drag your feet - Rudyard Kipling

It's like your poems just keep getting better xP

I like the way you've included questions in this and it sounds more heart felt that way ( :