The growth is done well, but I think yo could add a couple more stanzas to make it more detailed. 

(I'll have to reexamine this poem to look for clues. OOOOHHH I feel like a P.I. !    :)

Thank you so much!  It's a poem but because it's a villanelle, there's a lot of repetition, giving it the kind of refrain feeling. (Btw if you liked the style of this, read Sylvia Plath's Mad Girl's Love Song - amazing)

And there are actually two clues as to the speaker of the poem, who inspired me to write it - one is the quotation at the beginning and the second is the title - any guesses? :)

thanks for you detailed and helpful feedback!

I truly enjoyed this. Are these lyrics or a poem? It was very original and the word choice was wonderful. Part of me could grasp what you were talking about, but another part of my mind went what? The poem is a bit baffling, because you don't know who is telling it, but I think it worked well for this poem. 

Your take on death was very unique, I enjoyed this, because it wasn't cliched in the slightest. I liked the length.

"Let thunderous Heaven Overflow my Ears!" is a great line and I loved it, though it got a bit repetitive after a couple of time. I understand repetitiveness though, It's a useful tool. 

This was beautifully written, especially with the old English kind of accent, that added another depth but wasn't over powering the way used it.

The one thing I would have to say is that it was a bit confusing. Towards the end I was looking for an unveiling of the narrator, but none came. I didn't understand where you were coming from, yet I loved the poem anyway, that shows how good a writer you are. Nice job!