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The Hurt, Broken<and Abused

September 4, 2011
By XxMidnightKissxX SILVER, Hardinsburg, Indiana
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XxMidnightKissxX SILVER, Hardinsburg, Indiana
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Love me or hate me, I don&#039;t care which, just don&#039;t try and change me.

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Judgement,
That's what I see in their eyes,
Everytime they loook at me.
Disdain,
Is evident on their faces.
Their beautifully, perfect faces.

"You're worthless"
They sneer at me,
Telling me things I already know.
Whispering insults,
Meant to hurt and destroy.
And they work.

If only....
If I think to myself.
If only I was as pretty as they are.
If only I was thinner.
If only I was smarter.
Maybe things would be different......

But there's no point.
There's no point to "if onlys".
They're just wishes.
Wishes that will never come true.
Wishes from the heart of the hurt,
Of the broken and the abused...

© Maria B., Boston, MA

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recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 8:40 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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&quot;These are the times that try men&#039;s souls.&quot; - Thomas Paine.<br /> <br /> &quot;You don&#039;t understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could&#039;ve been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am.&quot; - On the Water Front<br /> <br /> &quot;This is my place of failure.&quot;

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I won't lie about being able to relate but I will say that you're talented! Hopefully you're not still feeling this way. Remember; True beauty comes from the inside! I've met enough rotten people with the most pleasant of appearances.
BluBliss GOLD said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 6:22 am
BluBliss GOLD, New York, New York
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Bella&#039;s love for Edward was like, &quot;Omg. He&#039;s hot. He&#039;s mine because he sparkles. Now I&#039;ll brood the wholle book while I&#039;m with him.&quot;

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imy favorite line was "they sneer at me, telling me things i already know." this poem is beautiful...like the beauty of pain.
pinkowl BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 11:09 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Jeremiah 29:11

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so great! i know i related to this poem, so many other people can. wow, you're so good! <3
TaylorBreanne said...
on Oct. 22 2011 at 6:52 pm
Wow. I really liked this! You're very talented! Can you check out my stuff? Thanks!
BeautysBeast GOLD said...
on Sep. 13 2011 at 10:55 pm
BeautysBeast GOLD, Okinawa, Other
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BETTER TO BE YOURSELF AND BE NOBODY THAN BE SOMEONE ELSE AND SOMEBODY ;)

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really good writing :D kinda made me wanna tear up :/