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You can't write a poem about Wendy's

May 10, 2012
By iLOVEuBABE SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
iLOVEuBABE SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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To the world you may be one person but to one person you may be the world.


Food is the only thing I think about all day
My stomach is growling
I walk through the cotton blowing in the wind
I walk across the bridge over the lake with children playing in it

I walk into Wendy’s with the smell of delicious food overpowers me
Everyone is stuffing their faces
The man that took my order smelt like soda
then all of a sudden he melted into a large sprite I take the sprite to-go

The lake turns into sweet and sour sauce
The kids turn into crispy chicken nuggets
The bridge crumbled into a pile of french fries
The cotton became fluffy ice cream

Suddenly everything turns into food
It is my dream world
I stop and think to myself this is how the world should be
all day everyday
And no one would ever get fat


The author's comments:
Inspired by the poem, You can't write a poem about McDonalds, by Ronald Wallace.

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on Jun. 14 2012 at 2:17 pm
iLOVEuBABE SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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To the world you may be one person but to one person you may be the world.

thanks Ivvilynn

on Jun. 14 2012 at 12:52 am
Ivvilynn BRONZE, LiIttleton, Colorado
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We’re all a little weird. And life’s a little weird. And when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in to mutual weirdness and call it love.

It's definitely funny! In an artistic way, if that makes any sense. I like it!

on Jun. 13 2012 at 2:44 am
iLOVEuBABE SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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To the world you may be one person but to one person you may be the world.

look at my comment

on Jun. 13 2012 at 2:44 am
iLOVEuBABE SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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To the world you may be one person but to one person you may be the world.

well i like it soo whatever

 


on Jun. 11 2012 at 11:20 pm
iLOVEuBABE SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
To the world you may be one person but to one person you may be the world.

well i have a really high matabalism but i wish other people wouldnt get fat

 


on Jun. 11 2012 at 4:56 pm
SleepyPencil BRONZE, New York, New York
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"Nothing is impossible except impossiblity itself..."- Unknown

I wish no one would ever get fat.....oh wells. :D

J1029 SILVER said...
on May. 31 2012 at 5:59 pm
J1029 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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Sing like no one is listening,<br /> Dance like no one is watching,<br /> Love like you&#039;ve never been hurt and<br /> Live like it&#039;s heaven on earth. <br /> <br /> - Mark Twain

I like it a lot. It has a lot of similarites to Ronald Wallace's poem, but it was still it's own. I enjoyed reading it. 

on May. 31 2012 at 1:28 pm
iLOVEuBABE SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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To the world you may be one person but to one person you may be the world.

If you look at my comment it says inspired by you cant write a poem about mcdonalds

on May. 31 2012 at 1:19 pm
hobo12321 PLATINUM, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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none, there&#039;s too many, although the one about the grapefruit is good. Any by Douglas Adams

Isn't this similar to the poem "you can't write a poem about McDonalds?"

it's still fun tho