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A Doctor

November 12, 2012
By SHER_locked PLATINUM, Alta Loma, California
SHER_locked PLATINUM, Alta Loma, California
32 articles 2 photos 51 comments

A Doctor someone is who heals our hurts.
He mends us of the universe's harm.
He's always there to save us, day or night.
But you, so old and sad, mislabeled are.
You fight in wars and wounds inflict not heal.
But please don't stop; we all will surely die.


The author's comments:
This was my first attempt at iambic pentameter, and I'm actually quite proud of how it turned out. In case you couldn't guess, it's about Doctor Who.

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on Feb. 22 2014 at 6:16 pm
SHER_locked PLATINUM, Alta Loma, California
32 articles 2 photos 51 comments
Thank you so much, again! I'm glad to know someone appreciates it so much. :)

on Feb. 22 2014 at 11:48 am
uncomfortableBrunette SILVER, Lr. Sackville, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I want to hate you half as much as i hate myself

Wow. Your writing is beautiful! (if you haven't noticed I read alot of your work) I love your fan fiction and poetry!