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Night Before An Exam

March 19, 2013
By BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
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Feeling very tired
My eyes are shutting
Now am stretching
And I keep Yawning
But I kept on reading
With my eyes peeling

At last am standing up
Thinking I might fall
But i make it to my room
Saying I have tried
Saw my sister on the bed
Just asked her to scoot over
Laid down and stretched
Feeling very tired
I let sleep take over.

© Alexis R., Clarkdale, AZ

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BlurAngel GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2014 at 9:44 pm
BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
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Love is an Emotion of strong Affection and Personal Attachment.....

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Thanks,and i know what you mean,especially at the end, i wish i had written "Closing my eyes, i let sleep take over"
LiraDaeris PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 12:07 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

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There's a nice serene simplicity with the words that goes well with the theme. However, I'd say "Feeling very tired" has a bit of an awkward ring to it.