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Not My Business Reply

June 26, 2013
By Sanderka134 BRONZE, Leeds, Other
Sanderka134 BRONZE, Leeds, Other
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'Its funny how the people we remember least make the biggest impression on us'


They came in the early hours of the morning; the commotion woke me from my sleeping state: muffled screams of terror and mysterious bangs could be heard threw the floorboards. I jump from my bed, all tiredness forgotten. Thunderous feet could be heard on the steps coming closer and closer. The look of pure terror on my wife’s face confirmed what I already knew. I crossed the room quickly and pressed my wedding ring into her hands “remember me” I pleaded, she nodded but said nothing. Suddenly it all went quiet and the atmosphere in the room changed. The footsteps had stopped. I walked slowly towards the door reaching out a shaking hand to open it, it exploded inches from my finger tips and there stood a man no older than 20 with not a drop of emotion in his stone cold face.
That’s when they first hit me, I didn’t realise there was more than one of them. I was stood, frozen in shock at how young this person in front of me seemed to be. He was barely of age but carried a gun and had the eyes of an old man. Dizzy and confused I was dragged from my home and stuffed in to a waiting jeep.
I don’t remember much after that only pain and humiliation. When I awoke I was at the end of my street, it was dark probably only one or two o’clock in the morning. I was tired, I ached mentally and physically, I just wanted all the pain and fear to stop. I made it home, still can’t remember how but I did and collapsed outside my front door praying the right people would find me. With one last glace around to make sure I was completely alone I sank back into blissful unconsciousness once more.


The author's comments:
So this a short piece I wrote in reply to a poem I studied at school: "Not My Business," by Niyi Osundare. this poem moved me and I felt inspired to write this from the point of view from the man who they target. please read the original poem before as it will give more depth to the writing.
Disclaimer: I did not write the poem I was simply inspired by it.

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