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October 8, 2013
By savannah harrison BRONZE, Highland Park, Michigan
savannah harrison BRONZE, Highland Park, Michigan
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Interest
Know her name which is savant regardless of her spelling. Her name make unique, because of her brave stature and characteristics. Make her laugh, for laughter is the key to opening her warm and gentle heart .opening her heart brings curiousness to they interested with your charm , you will have a chance at find Her soft side her soft side is golden, pure and miraculous to sea. Her smile will show, her lips will park exposing that plum flesh. Now you use activeness to bring he body closer to you’re in the idea of allowing her to know you wonder, a warm feeling in the bottom of her gut. Speak to her, tell her your wants and needs .make her understand and see that’s she the most pretty and wonderful women in the word. leave her with the biggest smile on her face at the end of the day making her want you to stay and tell her more.






Reflection
My mentor poet was wonderful the length was nice rhymes were together words fit with each other. My mentor port impacts on my writing by the rhymes the braking in between the words. my poetry has changes a lot from the bringing was word changed from little word to better words my poems have got to rhyme and also my decisions as a poet was to work really hard and to know that one word and change into so much more other words


The author's comments:
its about getting to knoe a girl better and knowing how to treat her right and making her feel very pretty about her self

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