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Jake and his mistake

April 22, 2014
By MrsAutumnStyles BRONZE, Rensselaer, Indiana
MrsAutumnStyles BRONZE, Rensselaer, Indiana
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I'll be the savior of hope and salvation. I will go shine your light to the world


I once had a friend named Jake
He was only eleven when he made this mistake
He took his life
The next day I found out
The pain I felt
It was piercing like a knife
He never got to live life fully
He was picked on by a bully
And more
He then crossed heavens door
He had a girlfriend names Jade
His memory was with her and it started to fade
He was my best friend
To bad his life was taken to an end


The author's comments:
I had to write a poem for language arts. And I thought of my friend Jake who was a big inspiration for this poem. Too bad he took his life and never gets to see it. He's in heaven.

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on May. 8 2014 at 1:55 pm
MrsAutumnStyles BRONZE, Rensselaer, Indiana
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I'll be the savior of hope and salvation. I will go shine your light to the world

Thank you Jess

on May. 7 2014 at 4:21 pm
Jessalynn BRONZE, Rensselaer, Indiana
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"If the speed kills me, do not cry because I was smiling." Paul walker

This is an amazing poem, almost made me cry, I miss him too