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A Place of my Creation

July 29, 2014
By Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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I want to live in a place of my creation,
A place where no one lies or forgets.

A wondrous land with sprites,
Devoid of lectures and regrets.

I want to play in enchanted woods,
And dance to my own dark songs.

I wish I could find this world,
Where everyone belongs.

But this perhaps is why,
I should never reach it;

It lies amongst the stars,
And lovely candle beaches.

© Ryan P., Greenwood Village, CO

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Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Aug. 31 2014 at 1:08 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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Thanks so much!!! I am sure you are an amazing poet! Never stop writing, because if you do, the world will be let down! :( Keep WRITING PLEASE!! I loved your poem "You're Gone" soooo much!
Starlight99 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 30 2014 at 9:18 pm
Starlight99 BRONZE, Somewhere, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I&rsquo;ve learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel. &ndash;Maya Angelou<br /> <br /> The two most important days in your life are the day you are born and the day you find out why. &ndash;Mark Twain

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I seriously love this poem! I wish I could write like you :-) This is so relatable and the wording is perfect 5 stars :-)
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Aug. 22 2014 at 11:36 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

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I know right? :)
Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Aug. 22 2014 at 10:47 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them.&quot;<br /> Henry David Thoreau<br /> <br /> &quot;I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once.&quot;<br /> John Green

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This is very relateble; if only we could live in our own imagination, life would be grand. Wonderful!