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When Sorrow Surrounds...........

March 19, 2015
By pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Remember, today is the tomorrow of yesterday you worried about.


When blood mingled into sand,
Not able to stand, they bent.
Over the bodies, who meant their soul,
Closed their eyes for the tears to ball.
Recalling the memories, spent with them,
At dawn, at dusk and at noon.
With a broken heart and zeal in eyes,
they cried, for the one's they cried.
Someone saw their hurt and tried,
to discourage the ones,
Who knew to fly.
They flew with the zeal, they had in their eyes,
For the one's who died, for whom they cried,
With those eyes, who had the zeal to fly.
They flew, flew and flew, then again
someone, to the grouund them threw.
But they had a burning desire,
When they  got surrounded with sorrow high,
They decided not to quit, and fly.
They made all the difficulties surrender,
To tell that someone, their blunder, Who tried to capture a bird, which with,
High sorrow too, knew to fly.....
 


The author's comments:

When people are discouraged, fell lonely, have no wish to live, some suicide while some rise, live and fight their sadness, for the sakes of their lovings.


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on May. 29 2015 at 6:35 am
pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Remember, today is the tomorrow of yesterday you worried about.

Thanks a lot! =)

on May. 15 2015 at 9:53 am
LotusChild PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Let them hate, so long as they fear me" ~Colligula

I like the rhyming in this, the use of the word zeal I think is out of place (but that's entirely just my opinion, there's no real problem with it). There's not much I can say about this piece, it's message I think is hidden behind the words, it's subtle and I'm usually pretty blunt with my meanings, so I feel slightly out of my element, though there is a certain kind of imagery in your wording that when paired with the picture you chose for this piece does have a strange feel, in a good way.