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Sibling's Love!

May 24, 2015
By pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Remember, today is the tomorrow of yesterday you worried about.


So hard you tried to tease me,

But couldn't break my equanimity.

Stepping on my toe, calling me your foe,

Meddling in between my issue, 

Hard you tried, making me scream,

But couldn'y succeed,

To break my divinity.

Your diurval nuisance to annoy me,

Couldn't change me.

Your imps are comic to me,

Try to understand, it's never-changing me!

Cozening me you realized, I sent you to conventry.

Fear of losing me arised, you cried,

My sis! You're my sky.

I laughed, juxtaposing my emotions,

realizing that your friendly enemity, 

Is my equanimity!



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on May. 28 2015 at 10:30 am
pikachulover SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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Remember, today is the tomorrow of yesterday you worried about.

Hehe, yeah, I just noticed them after it got published, I'll take care next time. Anyways, thanks for your endurable comment! :)

on May. 28 2015 at 10:20 am
LotusChild PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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"Let them hate, so long as they fear me" ~Colligula

Okay, so I actually enjoyed the skipping rhythm of your rhyme scheme here, slant rhymes and such, they flow together well. Your diction is awesome, these words that are so underused, they feel fresh and new. The only problem I spot in this piece is that you didn't proofread it before posting... :/ If you can't notice the errors in your work before you post, try sending it to a friend and they can proofread it. Otherwise, it looks great. I like it!