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You Never Came

March 10, 2009
By Wolfy DIAMOND, Huntsville, Alabama
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Wolfy DIAMOND, Huntsville, Alabama
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A room without a book is like a body without a soul.

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The stars glittered brightly,
Reflecting on the oil-smooth water,
The powder-white sand mirroring
The clear, bright moon.
I just sat there, waiting.
'Where is he?' I wondered.
The night would have been perfect,
But you still didn't come.
I sat there till dawn.
Then I slowly stood,
Crying silently to myself.
You never came.

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Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 7 2010 at 8:29 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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very nice. you have a very natural talent for vividly portraying your surroundings in a way that humanity has been struggling to do since the 3rd grade. i see you write alot of haiku's...you should read "it's you turn; try" by insaneprincess...you both have nice work..
Wolfy DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 26 2009 at 3:42 pm
Wolfy DIAMOND, Huntsville, Alabama
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A room without a book is like a body without a soul.

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Thank you!!!!!
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 26 2009 at 2:37 am
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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this was really good. i loved it! :)
Wolfy DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 7 2009 at 9:50 pm
Wolfy DIAMOND, Huntsville, Alabama
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A room without a book is like a body without a soul.

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You're a hard man to please aren't you? I meant it to be like that. She was crying silently. A single tear, and she wasn't really moving other than getting up.
EdytD SILVER said...
on May. 26 2009 at 9:56 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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Love the strong imagery in the beginning. You could strengthen the second to last line by describing the tears running down your face, or your shoulders shaking in anger/sadness.