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I Love You

November 12, 2009
By Rainey GOLD, Dumfries, Virginia
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Rainey GOLD, Dumfries, Virginia
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I&#039;ve never told a lie and that makes me a liar, I&#039;ve never made a bet but we gamble with desire, I&#039;ve never lit a match with intent to start a fire but recently the flames are getting out of control<br /> - All Time Low: Jasey Rae

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Should I tell you now or let it go
Ignore the fact or let you know
That I love your deep blue eyes
And how they twinkle like the stars in the sky
And that I adore every freckle on your face
And how they greet me with your warm embrace
But only if you knew
How I really feel about you
And that I want to be more than just friends
And be with you until the very end
Of time. But only if you felt the same
And I wouldn’t have to play your stupid game
Known you for so many years
And I have wasted my time with tears
At the very thought of you with her
This is what I will endure
At the possibility of being with you
And I wish you loved me too
And as our relationship grew
I fell more and more in love with you
Though I know you’ll never feel the same
I will continue to play your games
Because I just want to spend time with you
Maybe things would be different if you knew
That I’m so obviously in love with you

© Kayla D., Croydon, IN

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem about this guy I like who doesn't have a clue I like him when it is so obvious to everyone else. <3
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Rainey GOLD said...
on May. 6 2010 at 4:44 pm
Rainey GOLD, Dumfries, Virginia
14 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I&#039;ve never told a lie and that makes me a liar, I&#039;ve never made a bet but we gamble with desire, I&#039;ve never lit a match with intent to start a fire but recently the flames are getting out of control<br /> - All Time Low: Jasey Rae

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yeah, but now im like over him. lol.....idk, i just like someone else more, haha, who is actually nicer to me....lol....but i guess i will always like him....lol...but what really got me mad was that hannah jane wrote about the EXACT same thing and she is critisizing my poem
Mrs.Lautner GOLD said...
on May. 6 2010 at 8:36 am
Mrs.Lautner GOLD, Fife Lake, Michigan
17 articles 0 photos 14 comments

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someone asked me if i knew you <br /> i turned my head wiped my tears away <br /> and said no not anymore<br /> <br /> Gravitation isn&#039;t responsible for people falling in love.<br /> <br /> The hottest love has the coldest ending

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I totally agree with you...! I am having the same problem his names jack and i felt like he liked me and we did some things but then he told me he didnt anymore it was just a two day thing. :( I cried for this way almost a year ago that we did stuff and now im still not over him so dont feel like your the only one girl you got potential if he dont ask you you ask him go for it. be the man lol jk
Rainey GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 9:15 pm
Rainey GOLD, Dumfries, Virginia
14 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I&#039;ve never told a lie and that makes me a liar, I&#039;ve never made a bet but we gamble with desire, I&#039;ve never lit a match with intent to start a fire but recently the flames are getting out of control<br /> - All Time Low: Jasey Rae

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someone only rated it as a one star :(.............sydney i hope u didnt do that trying to be funny. But thats okay if u dont like it whoever you are, because i like it and so do alot of other people. :) i appreciate your criticism (dont think i spelt that right) but if you could just tell me what you didnt like about it, it would help me to better my writing
Rainey GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 11:43 am
Rainey GOLD, Dumfries, Virginia
14 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I&#039;ve never told a lie and that makes me a liar, I&#039;ve never made a bet but we gamble with desire, I&#039;ve never lit a match with intent to start a fire but recently the flames are getting out of control<br /> - All Time Low: Jasey Rae

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and please only comment about the poem
Rainey GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 11:41 am
Rainey GOLD, Dumfries, Virginia
14 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I&#039;ve never told a lie and that makes me a liar, I&#039;ve never made a bet but we gamble with desire, I&#039;ve never lit a match with intent to start a fire but recently the flames are getting out of control<br /> - All Time Low: Jasey Rae

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well actually i am trying and everyone knows he likes me but when was the last time a guy actually told a girl how he felt, he even told my friend he liked me. and besides how in the world would you know anything about this....like not to be mean but you dont have the right to comment on his feelings or mine...and even if he doesnt like me i would still like him
HannahJane SILVER said...
on Feb. 18 2010 at 9:09 pm
HannahJane SILVER, Woodbrige, Virginia
7 articles 3 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Maybe its not my weekend but its gunna be my year-

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Well hon, u obviously rnt trying hard enoulgh or he dont like u... srry but its the darn truth...
Rainey GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 3:58 pm
Rainey GOLD, Dumfries, Virginia
14 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I&#039;ve never told a lie and that makes me a liar, I&#039;ve never made a bet but we gamble with desire, I&#039;ve never lit a match with intent to start a fire but recently the flames are getting out of control<br /> - All Time Low: Jasey Rae

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please please comment....