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December 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

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Watching her fall apart,
Made me crumble too.
I didn't know how to help,
Or what I should do...

I knew that I could hold her,
And tell her it will be okay.
But then I began to wonder,
What else is there to say...

I can't promise her tomorrow,
Because I'm still not sure about today.
The only solution I could find,
Was to bow our heads and pray.

© Dillon O., Pompton Plains, NJ

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michelle98 SILVER said...
on Dec. 31 2014 at 4:52 pm
michelle98 SILVER, Bellevue, Nebraska
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beccalynn1663 GOLD said...
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you are incredible! i love all your writing you are a perfect poet:)
Calliashi SILVER said...
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And the oscar goes to...bluemagnet!
Someone_Who_Is_Loved GOLD said...
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This quote is one I made up.....<br /> &quot;You can&#039;t climb a mountian without a harness.&quot; It means that you can&#039;t go where you want to get in life without the help of your friends or family.

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You're the next Oscar Wilde/ Emily Dickinson!!!!!!!!
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
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Aww thank u:) yes lets hope we become famous lol
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Great! job! SOunds like you're a strong Christian and I am too! Wonderful job, keep writing. By the way, I agree with isabel18 about you becoming famous one day and I'm sure that many people on this site will be famous one day.( hopefully me included.)
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on May. 26 2010 at 11:21 am
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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Aw thank you so much:) I've been getting a lot of criticism on this site lately and your comments have truly been a blessing and an encouragement so I truly want to thank you for that:)
isabel18 said...
on May. 21 2010 at 1:08 pm

I LOVE ALL YOUR WORK! THIS POEM WAS SO TOUCHING! And truly going to God is the best thing we can do!

Great work! You'll be famous one day! LOL!

bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 23 2010 at 1:09 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Thank u so much:)

That's such a compliment:)
taintedannex GOLD said...
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taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
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The truth is that at some point, everyone&#039;s going to hurt you. You just have to decide who&#039;s worth the pain.<br /> <br /> Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

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Fantastic.

So raw and simple but heartwarming and touching all the same.