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The Victim

May 1, 2010
By .AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
.AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
62 articles 7 photos 31 comments

Every day she is faced with pain
Because people call her horrible names
They swear they are just joking
But she knows that it’s more than a game

Her clothes might not be in style
And she might be smart
But that does not mean people should play
With her fragile heart

Sometimes she can’t hear what they say
But she finds out how
They talk on the internet about her
And how she should die right now

They laugh and tease behind her back
Making her want to cry
And she sits alone at lunch
Trying to figure out why

The people she called friends
Were the ones that teased the most
And she walks down the hall with her head down
Trying to disappear like a ghost

She doesn’t know how long it will last
The bullying they do
She sits and waits for the bell to ring
Signaling the day is through

She has dealt with all her fears
Even the difficult ones
But she sits and thinks of the day
When the bullying is done

But that day has come and she made a decision
She said, “No more pain for me”
She took a step off the edge
She was only thirteen


The author's comments:
I wrote this for anti-bullying week at my school. I was inspired by all the stories of people taking their lives because of bullying and it is not right. We need to stop bullying because it has deadly consequences.

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on Jul. 8 2012 at 4:56 pm
hedwigy13 PLATINUM, Piscataway, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Only in the dictionary does success come before work." -unknown

i loved this piece. As someone who's been bullied most of their life, i can tell you captured the emotion well

on May. 25 2010 at 6:26 pm
HBCdance BRONZE, Ann Arbor, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself. Above all, let who you are, what you are, what you believe, shine through every sentence you write, every piece you finish." - John Jakes

I love it! It's deep, with just the right amount of emotion to really get it, you know? I think people should write more of these types of things, to help bullies realize what that are doing. Great job! =)

.AKA. DIAMOND said...
on May. 25 2010 at 6:05 pm
.AKA. DIAMOND, Cumming, Georgia
62 articles 7 photos 31 comments
I'm sorry but why did you, JadGh, say thanks for someone commenting first when you did not write this?

on May. 25 2010 at 4:51 pm
9Fairytale25Princess09 BRONZE, Keedysville, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"When life throws you rocks, pick them up and throw them at your teachers=)"

Its no problem=)

on May. 25 2010 at 12:24 pm
JadGhamloush BRONZE, Beirut, Haret Hriek, Other
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thanks for being the 1st to comment! :)

on May. 23 2010 at 8:05 pm
9Fairytale25Princess09 BRONZE, Keedysville, Maryland
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When life throws you rocks, pick them up and throw them at your teachers=)"

This wassss so good. I really like the way you write.