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“Destruction Of The Past”

July 14, 2011
By EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Give Up, Never Back Down." - Anonymous


We met in Science class period eight…
As I didn’t know my fate…
Me making jokes about one soul…
As I knew I had no chance in this role…

I made fun of this one…
Feeling like I won…
As I didn’t know she had a crush…
As I didn’t even notice that blush…

I saw the secret note…
Feeling my heart vote….
Feeling embarrassed what I’ve been telling her…
My head getting fuzzy like a lone wolves fur…

I call the number….
I feel like I am in a long slumber…
Hearing her gentle voice…
As I tell her my choice…

Our souls in love..
Feeling like everything was simple like a peaceful dove…
Knowing this was the best choice I have done….
As I felt the love stun…

Days to weeks and weeks to months as our brake ups begin..
My head begins to spin….
Feeling different then I use to…
As I feel like our love blew too...

As we end this relationship..
We stick with a simple friendship…
As we fell apart…
As we dart from each others heart…

As I did not know I hurt her mentally…
As I didn’t mean to do such it was accidentally…
As I fall into peace’s…
My loneliness increases…

I didn’t know what she was doing..
As I felt like this was suicide viewing…
She tells me what I have made…
As I was shocked when she used that blade..

My heart booming in pain..
As I did not know her heart was sprained..
She finally tells me her suffering…
The pain enters me as its flooding…


Years go by as I prove to my self I have changed…
She knows I have not reach that range..
My soul telling me that the jerk is out of me..
She knows that can not be..

I fall to my knees crying out for her trust…
As she watches me and as she just cussed…
The words I say meant nothing…
She stares at me chuckling..

As I would do anything for her forgiveness…
I sit here and go threw this…
She calling me pathetic…
As I know my heart is so poetic..

Why cant I just have her back in my life…
As I know this will go on like a bitter strife…
Love means nothing to this lone wolf in this empty world..
As I am in bed curled…


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece because I can never forget about my ex. I hurt her in the past and I wish I can take everything back what I did to her. I changed over time and I wanted to prove to her but she will never accept my forgiveness...

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on Jan. 7 2012 at 6:47 am
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Give Up, Never Back Down." - Anonymous

Thank you, I appreciate the comment and it it goes with the flow

cookiestar said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 6:22 am
Wow, this is amazing. It's well written, and I love the flow:).

on Jul. 31 2011 at 1:09 am
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Give Up, Never Back Down." - Anonymous

Alright HAH

wasps said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 1:01 am
wasps, Other
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LOL, no its fine :) Just as long as you write more I promise to hold back the waterworks :~)

on Jul. 31 2011 at 12:59 am
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Give Up, Never Back Down." - Anonymous

 I apologize for almost making you cry. I hope you enjoyed though the poem. I am gonna make more poems soon. 

wasps said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 12:20 am
wasps, Other
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Oh My Gosh, not to be sappy or anything, but I nearly cried! You have such a way with words :)

on Jul. 24 2011 at 5:52 am
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never Give Up, Never Back Down." - Anonymous

Thank you sooo much. :) 

on Jul. 23 2011 at 8:39 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
20 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Stupid Is As Stupid Does.&quot; -Forest Gump (;<br /> &quot;No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude.&quot;

This was good, I liked the easy flow to it. Its an easy read and it gives the reader a good, vivid image. Good job (:

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 23 2011 at 8:35 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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You're welcome(:

on Jul. 23 2011 at 11:28 am
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never Give Up, Never Back Down.&quot; - Anonymous

Thank you so much. I appreciate the comment. ^_^ Makes me happy. 

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 23 2011 at 11:25 am
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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I really liked this. I could tell it was from the heart, not forced, making it a great poem.

on Jul. 22 2011 at 8:32 am
EmmanuelGonzalez GOLD, West Orange, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never Give Up, Never Back Down.&quot; - Anonymous

Thank you and I saw them just now hah, but like my FOrum this is from the heart, and well this tells you how I feel at the moment. I made this 5 months ago and I am still adding more poems and currently making them, this is between a story and a poem so yeah xPP I hope you enjoy my other pieces.

on Jul. 22 2011 at 6:56 am
Writomania PLATINUM, New Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;What really does not kill you, will only make you stronger&quot;- Kanye West<br /> &quot;If there was no electricity, we would&#039;ve had to watch the television by candle light&quot;- Joe Jonas<br /> Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There&#039;s just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Oh wow.

It was like a story. There were a few typos which i'm sure would've been edited on a second read.

Other that that; it was well written :)