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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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Ryan_N said...
on May. 3 2016 at 4:39 pm
omg. Much amaze, much wow!
It's got a nice feel. You wrote it very well!!! I know this gets annoying and is kinda cheesy, but I really need some people to read over my poems. I was just wondering if anyone had the time to check out and comment any criticism on my post TeenInk.com/users/Tkenns much appreciated!!!
dpurdy said...
on Mar. 23 2016 at 1:19 pm
omg i love this poem
JWALK said...
on Feb. 18 2016 at 1:41 pm
I love how easily I can relate to this poem.
Jwalk said...
on Feb. 18 2016 at 1:39 pm
I love how easily I can relate to your poem.
Jamerson said...
on Feb. 11 2016 at 12:10 pm
No, you're right. It is plagerism if she takes credit for it.
LongLifeStory said...
on Jan. 8 2016 at 1:41 pm
That was really awesome.
Love_Live_Write BRONZE said...
on Jan. 6 2016 at 2:06 pm
This is a really great piece that I honestly love! I really admire how you were able to portray so many emotions in one poem!
Caycethepoet SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2015 at 9:35 pm
This is so simple, yet so beautiful and relatable. I love it!
wow love this poem. and if you guys have a minute than see this stuff of mine and vote if you like TeenInk.com/poetry/song_lyrics/article/836211/Im-Little-Bit-Alive/
Lilpolkanugget said...
on Sep. 2 2015 at 9:23 pm
Literally made my heart hurt. There's a guy that is a total jerk, but I still have a crush on him..... but for me one of the aspects is the delicious cologne..
_Tennessee_Love_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 23 2015 at 11:27 am
Beautifully written, I can relate to this very well, although the hair color would be changed to red haha, but still a wonderful piece keep up the work!
Justwondering said...
on Apr. 12 2015 at 1:52 pm
wait, isn't that plagiarism, unless you ask permission or aknowledge them? Or I am I being completely dumb and youre doing something perfectly alright? If you are, im really sorry. -Justwondering
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