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October 30, 2015
By Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.<br /> <br /> All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

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I'm alone with no one,
Without another soul,
But I do want someone,
To fill this empty hole.


I want somebody to care,
Somebody I could hold.
Who will twist my long hair,
Who will warm my own cold.


Someone who's gentle and soft
And cares for me lustfully.
And whenever I am lost,
I still have your company.


Someone whose love is warm,
Whose love is tender and kind.
Who's not persuaded with charm
Or the treasures that I find.


If only that special girl
Would show me the light
To the beautiful world,
I would hold her tight.


But I sit in despair,
Like a desperate lost dove,
That is willing to share
A precious gift called love.

© Michelle B., West Covina, CA

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I just wanted to show what I think love is. Enjoy.

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Tickle_that_pickle BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2018 at 1:19 pm
Tickle_that_pickle BRONZE, Lovington, New Mexico
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dang doooooooooooooood
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND said...
on May. 4 2016 at 9:40 pm
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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Yes you can totally sing this btw @TheReaderArielle , I have done it at a poetry slam before.
AnonymousAuthorAir said...
on May. 4 2016 at 11:10 am
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Can you sing this? This is very superb.
itsrainingcats GOLD said...
on May. 3 2016 at 10:29 am
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hey mac this is fabulous! keep on writing dude.
happymoment........ BRONZE said...
on May. 3 2016 at 10:09 am
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hey maculate its very flowy readable.Only some person can do this . Really great job..
Cam_is_Away said...
on May. 1 2016 at 12:29 am
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Great job!
@Emily GOLD said...
on May. 1 2016 at 12:26 am
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This is really good
StArFish504 SILVER said...
on Apr. 22 2016 at 2:07 am
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Love your style of writing; and this poem is beautiful! Keep writing and don't stop.
Poetry101 BRONZE said...
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SO AMAZING love this one a lot ;)
MBC1215 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 11 2016 at 3:29 pm
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THAT IS AMAZING!!!REALLY nice love poem.
BloodyMary PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 28 2015 at 3:50 am
BloodyMary PLATINUM, N/A, Other
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Beautiful!
Trench_Coat BRONZE said...
on Dec. 17 2015 at 11:50 am
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I am like speechless. No words. Well their are words, but still its amazing. This is a perfect way to think of love as.
Saturn. BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2015 at 10:14 pm
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Amazing. I have no words for this but... Wow.
winny_addams PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 9 2015 at 8:44 pm
winny_addams PLATINUM, Menomonie, Wisconsin
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wow that is beautiful
Breanna_Valentine PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 24 2015 at 10:59 am
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Wow.Thats all I have to say. Is. WOW.
prolixity GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2015 at 2:47 am
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this is amazing!! check out my work, it's kinda similar to this :))) TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/810451/Nothing-No-One/
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 6 2015 at 7:57 pm
Maculate_Dream DIAMOND, Riverside, California
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I have not failed, I just found 10,000 ways to not succeed.<br /> <br /> All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

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I wanted to say that my school had a poetry slam today at school and I had decided not only to recite the poem, but to sing it so, yeah I wanted to let people know.
Sunshine2420 SILVER said...
on Nov. 3 2015 at 10:39 pm
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Its great! Just instead of using 'whose' ,at some places it should have been 'who is'. Anyway your writing style is amazing so keep writing :)