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Forgetting you

October 11, 2018
By Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
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Forgetting you

Your bittersweet kisses

Make me forget

The worse is gone

When I am with you, I'm at my highest

When you’re gone I feel my lowest

Loving you will kill me yet,

I can’t stop

I know having you stay is a hidden sin

But I think of you every day

Your smile entices me

Your eyes invite me

Your laugh excites me

Your cries break me

Hurting you was not planned, but loving you was

I wish I could take it back

Feel your touch

But you are my past

And someone else’s future

You are not mine

And I need to forget you


The author's comments:

This piece was inspired by my broken heart... 


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on Apr. 27 at 7:20 pm
GeminiGalaxy20, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
โ€œI am but a merry wanderer of the night.โ€

What I find so relatable about this beautiful poem is knowing that you shouldnโ€™t love someone but end up loving them anyway. And also balancing wanting to hurt and cherish them.

katia_na said...
on Feb. 22 at 9:38 pm
katia_na, Smoky Lake, Alberta
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Favorite Quote:
If this was a story
I would say to wait for the ending
But this is a poem
And poems don't have endings

Hey if you ever need someone to talk to im here because believe me I know how much love can push like, people don't seem to understand that love can kill or save and we all gamble in it we that advantage in it because we don't understand.

yusufmahmoud said...
on Dec. 19 2019 at 2:25 pm
yusufmahmoud, Sacramento, California
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what I like about the poem is that its about the love he has for his sweetheart. Talking about "your eyes invite me, your laugth excites me."But, loving someone so much that he hast to be away from her.

on Dec. 19 2019 at 2:25 pm
MahendraSingh, Sacramento, California
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This poetry is very heartfull i'd love to read more

Marcolopez said...
on Dec. 19 2019 at 2:18 pm
Marcolopez, Sacramento, California
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This is the best one i've seen. Its heart touching. what made you write this masterpiece?

on Nov. 29 2019 at 1:22 am
sarahshahzad BRONZE, Other, Other
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amazing words..!! I love to write as well, have my own poetry but this is realy amazing..

on Nov. 26 2019 at 8:16 am
fatimahtuz-zahra BRONZE, England, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Don't be pushed around by the fears in your mind.๐Ÿ–ค๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ–ค .Be led by the dreams in your heart.

this poem was awesome great job!๐Ÿ˜€

on Nov. 18 2019 at 10:53 am
Makayla55555 BRONZE, Twin Lake, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Act as if what you do makes a difference.
IT DOES."

This piece was wonderful

on Jun. 4 2019 at 8:40 am
Isaiahwoodruff123, Newark, Delaware
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This poem was a lot better then expected good job !

Moejoe24 said...
on Jun. 3 2019 at 10:44 am
Moejoe24, New York City, New York
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This is kinda cute

jenny-talia said...
on Jun. 3 2019 at 8:27 am
jenny-talia, Penis, Idaho
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I like boys

lolawashere said...
on May. 31 2019 at 1:26 pm
lolawashere, Shelton, Washington
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Love this

iloveme1011 said...
on Apr. 2 2019 at 6:51 pm
iloveme1011, Greensboro, North Carolina
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Wow!! This is super romantic!!

TKS SILVER said...
on Mar. 18 2019 at 9:45 am
TKS SILVER, Christiansburg, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
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This piece is honestly a mood.

on Mar. 7 2019 at 1:20 pm
marine6704 SILVER, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"/Friends are not just a relationship, or a book unwritten. its a BOND OVER TIME" Elisabeth Shinault

What a well written poem! You connect people with similiar experiences without even saying a specific experiences. Well you at least had me feel like I knew what was happening. Great job on the flow!

Kadin73 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2019 at 11:57 am
Kadin73 BRONZE, Murfreesboro, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"see, the night doth enfold us."
- Giacomo Puccini

Lovely darling. This is a deep poetic masterpiece. Reminds me of my Allpoetry days when I was writing deep poems.

on Feb. 26 2019 at 10:23 am
Brookie-cookie BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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I love this and hoe deep it is. It really is so relatable and brings up many feeling. I would really appreciate it if you could check out my work aswell, because I am a new writer. Thank you!

on Feb. 8 2019 at 11:42 am
lydiagerges BRONZE, Franklin, Wisconsin
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i can't express how this writing makes me feel a certain way. I love it so much, you're writing voice is truly beautiful. it would mean the world to me if you could read my writing and give me any feedback!! xoxo

on Feb. 5 2019 at 1:40 pm
lindseypeoples BRONZE, Greenwood, Arkansas
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i love how this poem just flows... it isn't wrote in a way that is too pretty its fake. it is real and super good !

on Jan. 24 2019 at 7:40 am
iamcloudyeyes SILVER, Spokane Valley, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
we are like human beings
used to be before they became
too civilized to enjoy themselves
- Don Marquis, The Lesson of the Moth

It really be that way.
I feel for this on a whole level, if I am being serious.
Wonderfully written.


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