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My Unknown Love

October 11, 2018
By samivv BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
samivv BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
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My unknown love is someone who is caring, athletic, humble

With a beautiful voice and features of a god

He awes me everytime I see him

Deep brown mysterious eyes with hair curlier than a curly fry

His love, his character, his smile, irreplaceable


My unknown love was my first real friend

His courage impressed me when he asked me to play on the playground

creative ideas that no other boy could ever have

Imagination that others dreamed of having

His energy, his snacks, his cooties,irreplaceable


My unknown love has created memories

Memories I will remember beyond the end of time

Every second we spend is filled with laughter

The thought of spending the rest of my life with him make me smile from ear to ear

His kisses,his hugs,his passion, irreplaceable


My unknown love is someone I see myself growing old with

Through thick and thin our amor will last

An everlasting friendship that grows to a love that will last to infinity

His grey hairs,his wrinkles, his last breath, irreplaceable


The author's comments:

This poem is written to the future love of my life.


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Thepotatoe said...
on Dec. 23 2020 at 1:12 am
Thepotatoe, Wylie, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how hard life can be, your always going to get through it!

I absolutely love it!

on Dec. 14 2020 at 6:05 am
darel_aranovski, Fair Oaks, California
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so beautiful)

mgaspar1123 said...
on Dec. 1 2020 at 12:52 pm
mgaspar1123, Harrisonburg, Virginia
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I thought this was really good because when I read it, I thought of one person the whole time and I didn't know that I would've had someone in mind. I just really liked the emotions it gave me as I read it. It's very lovely to read.

Klair said...
on Oct. 15 2020 at 11:44 am
Klair, Altoona, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Wrong will be right, when Aslan comes in sight. At the sound of his roar, sorrows will be no more, when he bares his teeth, winter meets its death, and when he shakes his mane, we shall have spring again.
-C.S. Lewis, The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe

This is beautiful. It makes me want to cry and laugh at the same time. It makes me feel something and that is what writing and art are all about, this is amazing!!

on Jul. 11 2020 at 12:50 am
GirlyGamerForever3, Bakersfield, California
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Favorite Quote:
Love can walk through fire without blinking.

This reminds me of my love, and how my heart aches for me to be with him. We used amor a lot when we spoke of love. I also see myself with him, growing old. This poem is very sweet, and heart warming.

on Apr. 30 2020 at 11:33 am
acressley2024, Corry, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
A body at rest stays at rest, A body in motion stays in motion.

This poem is really good keep up the good work

AdalineP said...
on Apr. 20 2020 at 10:28 am
AdalineP, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Even if you fall on your face, you are still moving forward." - Victor KiamI

This poem makes my heart ache in an oddly satisfying way. The way you write is so special. I love your descriptions, and this poem seems to discretely define love in its purest form. Love should be cherished. I love this poem more than I can explain. Keep writing!

yusufmahmoud said...
on Dec. 19 2019 at 2:32 pm
yusufmahmoud, Sacramento, California
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I like this poem because I want my crush to feel the same way that the poet is talking about her love.

on Jun. 7 2019 at 10:15 am
farihaaa85 SILVER, Riyadh, Other
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How much i love this!

on May. 16 2019 at 12:21 pm
amandalhatch77 SILVER, Forksville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Light travels faster than sound, that's why some people seem bright until they speak." ~ Steven Wright

This is such a sweet poem!!