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My Unknown Love

October 11, 2018
By samivv BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
samivv BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
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My unknown love is someone who is caring, athletic, humble

With a beautiful voice and features of a god

He awes me everytime I see him

Deep brown mysterious eyes with hair curlier than a curly fry

His love, his character, his smile, irreplaceable

My unknown love was my first real friend

His courage impressed me when he asked me to play on the playground

creative ideas that no other boy could ever have

Imagination that others dreamed of having

His energy, his snacks, his cooties,irreplaceable

My unknown love has created memories

Memories I will remember beyond the end of time

Every second we spend is filled with laughter

The thought of spending the rest of my life with him make me smile from ear to ear

His kisses,his hugs,his passion, irreplaceable

My unknown love is someone I see myself growing old with

Through thick and thin our amor will last

An everlasting friendship that grows to a love that will last to infinity

His grey hairs,his wrinkles, his last breath, irreplaceable

The author's comments:

This poem is written to the future love of my life.

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yusufmahmoud said...
on Dec. 19 2019 at 2:32 pm
yusufmahmoud, Sacramento, California
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I like this poem because I want my crush to feel the same way that the poet is talking about her love.

on Jun. 7 2019 at 10:15 am
farihaaa85 SILVER, Riyadh, Other
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How much i love this!

on May. 16 2019 at 12:21 pm
amandalhatch77 SILVER, Forksville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Light travels faster than sound, that's why some people seem bright until they speak." ~ Steven Wright

This is such a sweet poem!!

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